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DeadManWalking's Sprites: The Adventurer (Female)

Started by DeadManWalking, March 29, 2010, 03:51:13 am

Mari

Quote from: "Kagebunji"If you don't see, then I will point it out. I said him to fix it, and he did, so it is no wonder you don't see it on current version of this Guard. And please enlighten me what palettes YOU think aren't good enough, I'm curious as hell about this. Here is first version where I said back head needs to be fixed:
I did say, already.
  • Modding version: Other/Unknown
As the puppeteer pulls His strings,
The fragile doll spreads Her wings.
To dance a ballet as He directs
That is the Curse of the Marionette.

Controlled by a hand far, far above,
Forbidden to care, forbidden to love.
Forever shall She mime what She cannot know,
Until the day She loses her illusory glow.

Propped up on a stilt where wine once stood,
The Marionette is, once more, only wood.
Her glossy eyes have lost their shine,
Her silken hair, turned to twine.

What a fate awaits the poor little doll,
Who dances and runs but cannot stand at all.
And the puppeteer is applauded at the end of every show,
But the audience's joyous response the doll can never know.

I am but a doll on an endless stage,
Dancing for others whilst I slowly age.
My puppeteer sits far above,
Hiding His face behind a white glove.

And when I have aged to nothing but wood,
I will be tucked away in a closet where a doll once stood.
Then, as I gather dust and the world passes by,
I will be forgotten by the vast, blue sky.

Kagebunji

Quote from: "Mari"But as for the colours thing, I guess I can see what he says a bit.. But not on the ones he sees.
I see the legs on the last palette.. And they look.. Well, just look at the legs of the facing forward pose!

That is all you said about palettes. Stop saying bullcrap and tell wich ones other than last dammit.
  • Modding version: Other/Unknown

Lijj

Yeah, as Kagebunji said; could you make the hood tighter or more squire like in the portrait?
  • Modding version: PSX

Mari

Quote from: "Kagebunji"
Quote from: "Mari"But as for the colours thing, I guess I can see what he says a bit.. But not on the ones he sees.
I see the legs on the last palette.. And they look.. Well, just look at the legs of the facing forward pose!

That is all you said about palettes. Stop saying bullcrap and tell wich ones other than last dammit.
I ONLY SEE A PROBLEM WITH THE LAST ONE!
There is no problems with the other ones, to me.
If I saw problems with the other ones I would have said so, sheesh.
  • Modding version: Other/Unknown
As the puppeteer pulls His strings,
The fragile doll spreads Her wings.
To dance a ballet as He directs
That is the Curse of the Marionette.

Controlled by a hand far, far above,
Forbidden to care, forbidden to love.
Forever shall She mime what She cannot know,
Until the day She loses her illusory glow.

Propped up on a stilt where wine once stood,
The Marionette is, once more, only wood.
Her glossy eyes have lost their shine,
Her silken hair, turned to twine.

What a fate awaits the poor little doll,
Who dances and runs but cannot stand at all.
And the puppeteer is applauded at the end of every show,
But the audience's joyous response the doll can never know.

I am but a doll on an endless stage,
Dancing for others whilst I slowly age.
My puppeteer sits far above,
Hiding His face behind a white glove.

And when I have aged to nothing but wood,
I will be tucked away in a closet where a doll once stood.
Then, as I gather dust and the world passes by,
I will be forgotten by the vast, blue sky.

DeadManWalking

I made a new portrait out of the old one.  Also, there isn't enough of a single colorset in Wiegraf 1 to make a new one based off of it onto the guard's armor.[attachment=0:1rn4bjul]Guard Portrait L.png[/attachment:1rn4bjul]

degrofm

Quote from: "Mari"
Quote from: "Kagebunji"
Quote from: "Mari"But as for the colours thing, I guess I can see what he says a bit.. But not on the ones he sees.
I see the legs on the last palette.. And they look.. Well, just look at the legs of the facing forward pose!

That is all you said about palettes. Stop saying bullcrap and tell wich ones other than last dammit.
I ONLY SEE A PROBLEM WITH THE LAST ONE!
There is no problems with the other ones, to me.
If I saw problems with the other ones I would have said so, sheesh.

I believe what Mari is referring to are the bands of purple on the facing forward pose. If you compare how wide that band of purple is to the bands of green, or light blue, or dark blue, or red on the other palettes, you'll notice a marked difference in width.

Mari

Quote from: "DeadManWalking"I made a new portrait out of the old one.  Also, there isn't enough of a single colorset in Wiegraf 1 to make a new one based off of it onto the guard's armor.[attachment=0:2r2hn8tv]Guard Portrait L.png[/attachment:2r2hn8tv]
Definitely looking closer to the sprite, I suppose!
The neck strikes me as a little odd, though! But no complaints from me. Just a style thing, I think.
  • Modding version: Other/Unknown
As the puppeteer pulls His strings,
The fragile doll spreads Her wings.
To dance a ballet as He directs
That is the Curse of the Marionette.

Controlled by a hand far, far above,
Forbidden to care, forbidden to love.
Forever shall She mime what She cannot know,
Until the day She loses her illusory glow.

Propped up on a stilt where wine once stood,
The Marionette is, once more, only wood.
Her glossy eyes have lost their shine,
Her silken hair, turned to twine.

What a fate awaits the poor little doll,
Who dances and runs but cannot stand at all.
And the puppeteer is applauded at the end of every show,
But the audience's joyous response the doll can never know.

I am but a doll on an endless stage,
Dancing for others whilst I slowly age.
My puppeteer sits far above,
Hiding His face behind a white glove.

And when I have aged to nothing but wood,
I will be tucked away in a closet where a doll once stood.
Then, as I gather dust and the world passes by,
I will be forgotten by the vast, blue sky.

VampragonLord

very nice portrait, suits the character fairly well
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DeadManWalking

Well, I'd like to show a little armor on the portrait, but there's not enough colors available for that.

Lijj

Yeah, looks like the sprite would more with the less baggy hood. Very awesome sprite DMW
  • Modding version: PSX

Mari

Quote from: "DeadManWalking"Well, I'd like to show a little armor on the portrait, but there's not enough colors available for that.
Alright, let's get to hacking FFt into more colours than 16!
  • Modding version: Other/Unknown
As the puppeteer pulls His strings,
The fragile doll spreads Her wings.
To dance a ballet as He directs
That is the Curse of the Marionette.

Controlled by a hand far, far above,
Forbidden to care, forbidden to love.
Forever shall She mime what She cannot know,
Until the day She loses her illusory glow.

Propped up on a stilt where wine once stood,
The Marionette is, once more, only wood.
Her glossy eyes have lost their shine,
Her silken hair, turned to twine.

What a fate awaits the poor little doll,
Who dances and runs but cannot stand at all.
And the puppeteer is applauded at the end of every show,
But the audience's joyous response the doll can never know.

I am but a doll on an endless stage,
Dancing for others whilst I slowly age.
My puppeteer sits far above,
Hiding His face behind a white glove.

And when I have aged to nothing but wood,
I will be tucked away in a closet where a doll once stood.
Then, as I gather dust and the world passes by,
I will be forgotten by the vast, blue sky.

jimmyjw88

Continue listen to what they say. I see constant improvements. Good job.
Kindly upload the images to other image hosting sites. I can't view imageshack. Thanks.

DeadManWalking

I looked closely at it, and it appears the armor may be too light on the purple set which could be causing the problem with the pants, I'll try making  it darker.  Hrm.

mav

The portrait looks pretty good, just consider rounding off the left (his left) side of the hood. It's a straight line right now and looks a little unnatural. Otherwise, everything looks pretty decent.

Kagebunji

Quote from: "DeadManWalking"Also, there isn't enough of a single colorset in Wiegraf 1 to make a new one based off of it onto the guard's armor.

If you say this, then you either din't looked at Wiegraf's legs, or at my Guardian sprite. :P

Here:
download/file.php?id=5619
  • Modding version: Other/Unknown

DeadManWalking

I still don't see how they're too similar, heck, look at the Knight in vanilla if you want to see similar.  And, Mav, the reason the portrait does that is... it's cut off at that point, like your portrait's head.

Edit: Here, I think it's too light, though, it's what's causing the problem on the purple palette, too.  I tried darkening it up and got the bottom ones.  And, I'm not putting this on the blue cape, mainly because I think it looks downright ugly with the blue cape.  So, do you still have problems with the palettes?

Wolfran

Wow, is too much dark but looks really good
Welcome to FFH were you can do things like...

Mari

Quote from: "DeadManWalking"I still don't see how they're too similar, heck, look at the Knight in vanilla if you want to see similar.  And, Mav, the reason the portrait does that is... it's cut off at that point, like your portrait's head.

Edit: Here, I think it's too light, though, it's what's causing the problem on the purple palette, too.  I tried darkening it up and got the bottom ones.  And, I'm not putting this on the blue cape, mainly because I think it looks downright ugly with the blue cape.  So, do you still have problems with the palettes?
I'm confused. You used the red sprite in that picture, and you talked about the blue one..
But you forgot the purple one! That's the main one. =[
  • Modding version: Other/Unknown
As the puppeteer pulls His strings,
The fragile doll spreads Her wings.
To dance a ballet as He directs
That is the Curse of the Marionette.

Controlled by a hand far, far above,
Forbidden to care, forbidden to love.
Forever shall She mime what She cannot know,
Until the day She loses her illusory glow.

Propped up on a stilt where wine once stood,
The Marionette is, once more, only wood.
Her glossy eyes have lost their shine,
Her silken hair, turned to twine.

What a fate awaits the poor little doll,
Who dances and runs but cannot stand at all.
And the puppeteer is applauded at the end of every show,
But the audience's joyous response the doll can never know.

I am but a doll on an endless stage,
Dancing for others whilst I slowly age.
My puppeteer sits far above,
Hiding His face behind a white glove.

And when I have aged to nothing but wood,
I will be tucked away in a closet where a doll once stood.
Then, as I gather dust and the world passes by,
I will be forgotten by the vast, blue sky.

DeadManWalking

Yeah, I think I know the problem for the purple one, it's not the pants, but the armor is too light.

Here's one more, I decided to try again using the armor colors from the item spriteset.

I also added one more palette to use for the 'Always: Zombie' classes.

[attachment=0:37uac7bj]Guard Final Preview.png[/attachment:37uac7bj]

Mari

Quote from: "DeadManWalking"Yeah, I think I know the problem for the purple one, it's not the pants, but the armor is too light.

Here's one more, I decided to try again using the armor colors from the item spriteset.

I also added one more palette to use for the 'Always: Zombie' classes.

[attachment=0:2kr8nynx]Guard Final Preview.png[/attachment:2kr8nynx]
Looking great now!
  • Modding version: Other/Unknown
As the puppeteer pulls His strings,
The fragile doll spreads Her wings.
To dance a ballet as He directs
That is the Curse of the Marionette.

Controlled by a hand far, far above,
Forbidden to care, forbidden to love.
Forever shall She mime what She cannot know,
Until the day She loses her illusory glow.

Propped up on a stilt where wine once stood,
The Marionette is, once more, only wood.
Her glossy eyes have lost their shine,
Her silken hair, turned to twine.

What a fate awaits the poor little doll,
Who dances and runs but cannot stand at all.
And the puppeteer is applauded at the end of every show,
But the audience's joyous response the doll can never know.

I am but a doll on an endless stage,
Dancing for others whilst I slowly age.
My puppeteer sits far above,
Hiding His face behind a white glove.

And when I have aged to nothing but wood,
I will be tucked away in a closet where a doll once stood.
Then, as I gather dust and the world passes by,
I will be forgotten by the vast, blue sky.