Mercenaries Job Sprite Ideas (update: soon)(Image Heavy)

[Zozma]

the eyes are also the 40 year old mans eyes are they not? it shows age

[mav]

Closed? I dunno, but they're smaller than most:

[jimmyjw88]

Yes. The eyes are from 40 year-old man. Well, actually the whole head is from 40 year-old man. I took Algus head, as suggested and change it to look like 40 year-old man. ^^
Alright, mav. Thanks ^^

EDIT: Erm..what close? ^^

[Zozma]

if its a normal fighter the eyes could be borrowed from something more normal, the generics for example are pretty much late teen early twenties right? so the eyes dont show age like that

[jimmyjw88]

Hmm...I guess so. So meaning I should change the eyes? Does the hair show age?

[mav]

In my opinion the eyes don't show too much age, but I can see why it'd be perceived as such. The hair, on the other hand, just makes him look poor or hardened. It'll be the portrait that ages this guy for sure. If I work on this portrait, I'll make sure to keep him looking about the same age as most of the other generics.

[Asmo X]

#4 for scryer is the best. In the backwards diagonal the sleeve  is poking out too much

[jimmyjw88]

Alright. I'll fix that. Thanks ^^

Alright guys, I'll be off for 3 days. So, I'll continue Scholar and everything else when I'm back.
Again, sorry for the slow progress but I'll try to speed things up a little bit ^^
Okay then, see you all in 3 days ^^

[jimmyjw88]

Alright, I'm done with Scholar views. Sorry took awhile. Here are the five basic views of Scholar ^^

Update*

Scholar (5 views)

[MiKeMiTchi]

Looks nice jimmy. Well done.

[jimmyjw88]

Thanks Mike ^^
I guess I can start working these three sprites as the basic views are doing fine ^^

[Asmo X]

looks good Jimmy. Probably need slightly different shading on the back of the scarf on the back view. Maybe use some of that dark colour you used on the diagonal back view to show where a fold is. Use it on the edge of the fold rather than the middle (I think)

[jimmyjw88]

Thanks Asmo ^^
Alright. I fixed that scarf on the back view (erm...I think ^^) and I done with the arms but just to be sure, here's the spritesheet. If anyone can help test it and check it would be grateful. Thanks in advance ^^

[Asmo X]

The back diag scarf was perfect as it was.

[jimmyjw88]

Erm...Sorry but do you mean that I should change back that diagonal back view's scarf? Sorry for my poor understanding.

[Asmo X]

Change the back diagonal to the way it was. The back view is where the trouble was. You drew a dark line i see, now see what it looks like if you take a few pixels out of the middle of that line.

[jimmyjw88]

Oh...ok. Sorry about that. Something like this?

[Asmo X]

Yeah that seems to look better. Now on to the rest of the sprite sheet!

[LastingDawn]

Scholar's looking to shape up very well! Great work with that Jimmy!

[Sephirot24]

That Scholar looks ****ing great jimmy! Keep it up!

About the Scryer, I like the last one a lot, and I still like the Calc robe one.