Magus from CT

[ChronosAragami]

Ok, I rearrange his face to look like what MiKeMiTchi made the basis of Delita.

[scatttman]

for the back view i think
the sumoner is the best option

[SilvasRuin]

That 3-D version isn't official in the slightest, but I always have been impressed by how much that project seemed to mimic the original, so it should be a fine concept to follow.

[ChronosAragami]

Well, I'll try with the Summoner and the Ajora, to see which is better, then I post later.

[jimmyjw88]

Looking good. Keep the advices ^^

[ChronosAragami]

Ok, the hair of the Summoner was better ^_^

[MiKeMiTchi]

Give the skin shade a lighter color.
Or better yet, use the remaining color slot for a better skin shade.
Right now the skin tone doesn't blend with one another.

1st frame:
Work with the armor shading. The hair looks fine though.
4th and 5th:
Since you added long hair, you should add shadows below it as well.
Use cape colors for that.

[Seushiro]

yep looking good. . .

 how about raising the forehead a pixel since He was based of Vegeta's head and Vegeta has a high forehead. . . or instead of increasing lessen the darker brown shades to give the wide forehead illusion

[ChronosAragami]

The problem is, I'm already using all 16 color slots, but I think that trying to lighten a little the tone of his skin, it may even work.

[MiKeMiTchi]

Or, you could just darken the brightest skin shade.
That is, if you're having a hard time.

[ChronosAragami]

Ok, shadows and Vegeta head, and skin tone.

[MiKeMiTchi]

Hmm.. more.
The shadows on the 4th and 5th looks pillow shaded. Consider the light source.
???

1st: the black in the neck should be the darkest blue/violet shade. Armor looks better.
Skin tone: Hmm.. maybe lighten the darkest shade a bit more?

3rd: shading on armor is flat, add dark shades.

[ChronosAragami]

The problem is, I'm using the colors of the boots to create the shadow effect of the face.

[ChronosAragami]

I modified the armor and the shadows.

[MiKeMiTchi]

Oops, I weren't specific.
The shadow needed to be fix is the pixels from the cape.

[Cheetah]

His hair on the rear-side view looks like it is off center or something...

[ChronosAragami]

Cheetah, is because of his ear, and MiKeMiTchi can you give me an example? ^_^

[MiKeMiTchi]

Oh sure. But it might take a while.

[ChronosAragami]

ok !

[scatttman]

you can use the delita's hair as base is a lot like the magus but shorter