Kagebunji's sprites- Moving on...

[mav]

...yeah, it needs a lot of work. The red part of the robe looks okay, but that's it. The greens and the yellows look really choppy, the robe isn't symmetrical, and I don't quite understand what's on her chest...

[Kagebunji]

Well, it is all custom, besides it did it cause I was bored, didn't payed too much attention to it. Maybe someone other will work with this ugly queen

[Kagebunji]

I never asked, is Garnet hair different enough from Female Kinght?

[Twinees]

I reckon it looks fine as it is Kage. Only suttle differences but yours suits Garnet better. Keep the good work up

[woodenbandman]

Her breasts are too high, add some more shirt underneath them or it'll look like she's wearing old man pants up to the nipples.

[mav]

The hair looks great, in my opinion. I dunno if I completely agree with woodenbandman, but I can see where he's coming from...

[Kagebunji]

I already tried adding clothes, but it looks weird, but I do get your point, hmmm...

[jimmyjw88]

Kage, if you remember, I add bit white cloth under her breasts, around the stomach area, like her reference picture. Maybe that can help? ^^

[Kagebunji]

Yeah I still remember it, but I will pass with those clothes, it looks just fine to me now

[Asmo X]

She's actually wearing orange overalls or whatever you'd call them. I made this quick edit.

[jimmyjw88]

Yeah, that orange outfit actually strapped from her shoulder all the way down.

[Kagebunji]

With all respect Asmo, but this doesn't look right, but I know what you are talking about. I just wan't her look more adult-like, so I gave her bigger breasts

[Asmo X]

I made the strap too big but it was a 1 minute job. It's just for accuracy. If you want it to look like the source material you really should have included it in your design. You and everyone else should stop worrying about adding huge tits to your sprites. I see this shit come up way too often nowadays.

[jimmyjw88]

To me, tits or no tits doesn't matter. As you can see from the reference picture, they aren't big, actually. So, make it flat but with maybe a line in between to distiguish, may looks good too.

[mav]

The only problem with Asmo's is that it looks like there's only one strap. I don't mind Kage's too much, but perhaps straps are something to consider...

[jimmyjw88]

Well, if we can make the tits smaller, the strap will be visible, though most probably only one side as the other is blocked by the tits, unless you make it flat.

[Kagebunji]

But I have almost whole sheet done I don't wanna change everything now, but I will consider adding those white clothes again.

[mav]

I say finish what you have. Once you find a portrait or find someone to make a portrait, you can submit this. And if you're lucky, someone else will come along and "finish" it for you, by adding the straps and whatnot.

[Kagebunji]

I may edit this after I complete a whole sheet. Well, christmas began, so there will be some time to sprite

[Kagebunji]

People here is the thing, I have Lezard Valeth (VP) done at around 90%, only front attacking animations left, and I'm not certain to post it or not. Besides I'm working on a new hair for both Zidane and Lezard (they have almost the same hair), so you want me to post it or wait a bit till I finish new hair?