Kagebunji's sprites- Moving on...

[Kagebunji]

Yeah, if I get a nice portrait, I am submitting him, sheet itself is finished. I never heard of Jon Talbain, Atma

[Kagebunji]

Ok, Twin did a nice portrait for Werewolf. Now we need some crits as to what could be changed, tweaked, or improved. Suggestions are welcome. Thanks Twin!

[Mimi]

Wow! That is a great looking portrait. Twinees did a good job.

[Twinees]

=D. Tell me if you want me to do anything else, ill try and find time  

[Kagebunji]

I hoped Mav could come and take a look. IMO if we change colors to the Werewolf palette(I assume this is Cuar, yes? Causw it looks similiar, heh), it will be set. In the BMP I sent you you can look what palettes I did, with one exception, third palette has black fur now. Thanks for help Twin, lookin forward .

[Wolfran]

I think the mouth in the portrait is too short and the right ear try to move a few pixels to the left.

[Cheetah]

Yeah it still just looks a bit too much like the Cuar. I like Wolfran's suggestions. I would also suggest making the muzzle larger, like stretching it down a few pixels. Oh and the pure black nose is a bit odd.

[Lijj]

Nose seems a bit off angle.  And the mouth could be darker IMO. I'm not back home just kinda been lurking for a bit recently so I cant do much else.

[GeneralStrife]

holy shit liji reports in

[GeneralStrife]

err also the portrait? I have no qualms with it...twinees is damn good at portraits

[Twinees]

Took all suggestions (hopefully) into consideration.

Glad to hear from you Lijj  

[Kagebunji]

I Like it. Now all we need is a palette :3

[Lijj]

Glad to hear from you Lijj  

Glad to see you're still coming around. I'd like be back into spriting myself again soon. As soon as I collect all the money I've worked for and head north again.

[BeoulveBlack]

aww fooey... i was gonna do a werewolf too...btw kagebunji, did you finish the lenneth sprite?

[Kagebunji]

I did, you can get it on the sprite topic in submission section.

[Atma]

congrats on finishing Lenneth!  just downloaded the .spr and had a look at it... looks great!
oh, i did a quick search of Jon Talbain pix to see if there were any good pics of his face to give u a reference for a portrait, but there isn't that many good ones
just thinking it might be cool to have him bear his teeth a bit, but i dunno how tight ur palette is.

[Lijj]

Yay Kage!! I'm glad you finished Lenneth. Perhaps I'll finish that blue mage.

[Kagebunji]

I can send you the BMP of my current Blue Mage spritesheet, because honestly, I don't have time to pull off all this. KoI, Newtype, and now my own is a bit much, heh. If you want to finish it, Lijj, just tell me and I will send you the sprite sheet.

[Wolfran]

Hey Kage Congrats, your werewolf looks great but there are some minnor details like the colours of the portraits are different of the sprite, I don't think that must be the same but with similar colours it's fine to me and the vest in back frames looks weird.

[Kagebunji]

I forgot to write, yeah Titan and Werewolf are both done and submitted
viewtopic.php?f=16&p=130773#p130773
Wolf, colors are fitting, i used pre-existing ones for all the palettes you can see there. And be more precise about vest, cause I can't see anything wrong with it.