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yea... this is my first portrait, so what do you think...

Started by RolyTunedIn, September 29, 2008, 10:32:06 am

RolyTunedIn

September 29, 2008, 10:32:06 am Last Edit: December 31, 1969, 07:00:00 pm by RolyTunedIn
i was wondering what do you guys think? anything negative or positive...

KazeKasano

September 29, 2008, 11:06:35 am #1 Last Edit: December 31, 1969, 07:00:00 pm by KazeKasano
The mustache looks a tiny bit off, but other than that, it's good.
I like the hair color, especially.
We will build cities in a day, we will build towers to the heavens. We will be heroes.
This sleeping city doesn't know what's coming. She doesn't feel the heat.
Even when the darkness surrounds us, we shall light up the night.

DarthPaul

September 29, 2008, 11:14:16 am #2 Last Edit: December 31, 1969, 07:00:00 pm by darthpaul
Quote from: "KazeKasano"The mustache looks a tiny bit off

this coming from mr. feathers in the hair lol jk
Oh pitiful shadow lost in the darkness, bringing torment and pain to others. Oh damned soul wallowing in your sin, perhaps...it is time to die

RolyTunedIn

September 29, 2008, 12:27:22 pm #3 Last Edit: December 31, 1969, 07:00:00 pm by RolyTunedIn
thanks ill try to work on it more... but is it the the color of it or something else?...but other than that is there anything else wrong with it?

DarthPaul

September 29, 2008, 12:36:33 pm #4 Last Edit: December 31, 1969, 07:00:00 pm by darthpaul
the mustache seems to swing down too far and too early but that might just be me
Oh pitiful shadow lost in the darkness, bringing torment and pain to others. Oh damned soul wallowing in your sin, perhaps...it is time to die

Cheetah

September 29, 2008, 12:54:56 pm #5 Last Edit: December 31, 1969, 07:00:00 pm by Cheetah
Darthpaul is right, the angle of the stach is a bit off. I'm not sure what color you want his hair to be, but right now it just kind of looks blueish gray. I think you need more pixels of the lighter shades of the hair color. Overall the design is good and good overall for a first attempt. You are just missing a few details and shading stuff.
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RolyTunedIn

September 29, 2008, 01:16:53 pm #6 Last Edit: December 31, 1969, 07:00:00 pm by RolyTunedIn
okay thanks cheetah... i didnt see it at first but when you mentioned "angle" it made more sense... :)

DarthPaul

September 29, 2008, 02:43:59 pm #7 Last Edit: December 31, 1969, 07:00:00 pm by darthpaul
who is this pic based off of or is a made from scratch
Oh pitiful shadow lost in the darkness, bringing torment and pain to others. Oh damned soul wallowing in your sin, perhaps...it is time to die

RolyTunedIn

September 29, 2008, 11:42:46 pm #8 Last Edit: December 31, 1969, 07:00:00 pm by RolyTunedIn
i based it off of dycedarg...

DarthPaul

September 30, 2008, 01:01:18 am #9 Last Edit: December 31, 1969, 07:00:00 pm by darthpaul
ah yes i think i see it now
Oh pitiful shadow lost in the darkness, bringing torment and pain to others. Oh damned soul wallowing in your sin, perhaps...it is time to die

KazeKasano

September 30, 2008, 11:39:01 pm #10 Last Edit: December 31, 1969, 07:00:00 pm by KazeKasano
I see it.
And like the others said, it's the angle on the 'stache.
Also, it might be a tad too thick.
We will build cities in a day, we will build towers to the heavens. We will be heroes.
This sleeping city doesn't know what's coming. She doesn't feel the heat.
Even when the darkness surrounds us, we shall light up the night.

Jacob31593

October 18, 2008, 03:00:55 pm #11 Last Edit: December 31, 1969, 07:00:00 pm by Jacob31593
Quote from: "KazeKasano"I see it.
Also, it might be a tad too thick.
thats what i noticed, i dont see anything wrong with the angle though

RolyTunedIn

October 21, 2008, 11:24:09 pm #12 Last Edit: December 31, 1969, 07:00:00 pm by RolyTunedIn
well the angle depends on how you look at it... i see it both ways... but im still working on it...

AuraDragon

October 22, 2008, 12:01:06 am #13 Last Edit: December 31, 1969, 07:00:00 pm by AuraDragon
Eyes are flat, beard is rotated right by like 5 or so degrees, throws off the image, the hair needs to blend better, and the beard looks scruffy, and the dark area behind the head could be refined to make it look easier on the eyes...

Being truth full, unless you want me to say "Looks Awesome!"... O.o