But I do appreciate the comments. I will take another stab at re-writing the event from dialogue 5 and beyond - that might solve the issue. If not I will move on and come back to it in my second draft with the newest editor.
Are you a troll? Because I feel like
<Elric> Upgrade EVSP
<Xifanie> Upgrade EVSP
Don't listen to them! They want your SOUL!
<RavenOfRazgriz> Upgrade EVSP
He's a raven, he just wants to FEAST on your corpse!
<Guru> Upgrade EVSP
LIES LIES LIES!
<Nyzer> Upgrade EVSP
You're just another demon from the Netherworld! You can't fool me!