Jon's Sprites

[mav]

Mav what color should I change the dark pixels above the white legs to?

The next gray shade, seen right above his boots.

As far as the arms are concerned, just be aware that the female Thief is a terribly designed sprite. Use anything but it. I honestly have no gripes with your current arms, but if you wanna go for 100% accuracy then you'll have to choose something else.

[Mando]

Go Go Wind Waker sprite ;D with generic pallets, hopefully!

These colors here + black would be A-FREAKING-MAZING
considering that they are all the wind waker style may not be so bad.



Also I don't think your sprite's cap defys gravity as much as this one....

[Jon]

I know that this is off subject, but can some of you take a new look at my Character Creation Tutorial? Its under Site Submission>Tutorials. I just want someone to proof read it to make sure there are no mistakes. Sorry for posting this. Next post will be a sprite, I promise!

[Mando]

When I get off of work I can I will be off around 9pm cst.

ignore what i had here below it was suppose to be on an IM lol i didnt notice i typed it here.

[Jon]

@Ryudo6850: Huh??

Ignore the clothes and body for now, I wanna get the head right. Please lemme know if you think the Squire is more suitable. I tried to fix the hat, too:

[Tigerspike]

I think the hat looks better overall, but I think the rear view looked better before.

[Jon]

This looks really great in Shishi, I think I got lucky this time where I put the colors, because it seems to "flow", if you know what I mean. Wonder how it will look in game? Crits please:



Side note: I changed the back view hat to something else, this one really needs crits and also the side view.

[Jon]

I bet y'all are going to like this- the Tonberry! It's just an idea and I mean never to finish it:

[Kagebunji]

I saw a fair share of tonberries around here, this one is not bad, but not the best. His eyes are great Hehe, good job either way.

[Jon]

Thanks Kage! I based it off of male Summoner of course and the rest was just made by hand while looking at the FFTA Tonberry.

[mav]

Very choppy. Smash made a Tonberry frame as well, if I recall correctly. You might want to look to his for inspiration. Hey...what happened to the Cactuar?

[SilvasRuin]

Outline around the knife and lamp suck.
The collar is too high on its face.
The sleeve on our right kind of sucks.

[mav]

I guess Smash didn't make one. Here are a couple references and old WIPs, see if any of em will be useful to ya: a few frames by Sen, another version, by Lydyn, a bunch of portraits, note the Tonberry on there.

[Jon]

Haha, Sen and Lyndyn both more or less took the FFTA Tonberry and changed a few things around. The link to the portraits is very nice. I recognize all the characters straight away, but who is the 2nd to last guy with blond hair? Don't worry Mav, the Cactuar is not abandoned, in fact I want to work a bit on it today. I still need some crits on Link too please people! Forget the Tonberry, I won't continue him. I finished most of the back view walking poses, upload coming soon.

[Jon]

I did this for fun, the Dark Knight's best friend, the Paladin:



I might actually make a Paladin, human characters are easier to do.

[Kagebunji]

The barbut eh? I used it once too. Legs seem to be one pixel too far to right, move those back to left. Colors seem saturated, what exactly is used? I think you could use other colors. All is up to you.

[Jon]

I used MikeMitchi's Dark Knight Ramza as a base, I didn't move the legs at all, but now that you mention it, they are off by 1 pixel. He does look bizarre. Colors are from the Items sheet and its 52/2 's colors. I think I will make my own version, not based on the one above.

[Kagebunji]

Told ya they are off . Item palettes aren't a good choice for sprites, evidence above, heh. Good luck with your next attempt

[Zozma]

It's hard to keep your attention on one sprite project eh...?

[GeneralStrife]

Dude, paladin looks awesome. Finish this one!