Ramza edit

Helchilde · September 16, 2009, 11:59:32 pm

Actually it doesn't look half-bad. The red could use a little touch up, but over all it looks decent.

I could submit it for the Halloween contest .

Helchilde · September 17, 2009, 12:34:03 am

Ok this is the goth Ramza edit that Vanya jokingly requested. I personally do not like how the red is shaded, but I'll let all of you be the judge's. I should be done with the portrait in about 2 hours. I'll post it then.

Zozma · September 17, 2009, 12:35:28 am

the red is a bit out there. try borrowing red from another sprite's palette

also, it looks like the shades of red are not in the right order,

jimmyjw88 · September 17, 2009, 12:37:43 am

I think Vincent's red should be good though.

Helchilde · September 17, 2009, 12:41:23 am

I will when I finish the hair on the portrait. Thank Ajora I'm almost done with it.

Helchilde · September 17, 2009, 12:59:02 am

How is this? To me it looks a little pinkish, but it definitely looks better.

jimmyjw88 · September 17, 2009, 01:17:06 am

Yes. Its better now ^^
A little pinkish still huh? Hmm...perhaps try redmage red? Or knight's cape red?

Helchilde · September 17, 2009, 01:25:57 am

I wanted the red to be like dried blood. Ramza is going goth so he needs to go all the way. His face is slightly pasty and he dyed his hair black and got rid of the gay cowlick and ponytail! :lol:

Helchilde · September 17, 2009, 01:38:54 am

And here is the portrait. I'm going to have to edit the eye's of the sprite to black so that they will match the portraits eyes. I also modded the scar to look like it zigzags.

jimmyjw88 · September 17, 2009, 01:40:55 am

I guess this red isn't good enough right? Hmm...

Helchilde · September 17, 2009, 01:47:49 am

I'll try that one and see. I might mix and match till I get the color just right.

Could I also try the red on the submission that you just posted for the Halloween contest? It looks awesome.

MiKeMiTchi · September 17, 2009, 01:59:58 am

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The 'zigzags' were too visible. I suggest you lighten it.
It looks more of a TATTOO.

Borrow any red, as long as they're not supersaturated. lol.

Helchilde · September 17, 2009, 02:01:40 am

This is with the red mage red palette. It looks even better but, still...not quite bloody enough.
If you could not guess I'm a perfectionist when it comes to these things. I'll use this version if I cant find a better palette.

Cheetah · September 17, 2009, 02:14:11 am

I don't think the red is your problem. I think the hair and cloths using the exact same shades of black is just making the whole sprite a bit too flat.

Helchilde · September 17, 2009, 02:20:14 am

Edited portrait. I'll get to changing the shades of black later today. Its 1 AM where I'm at.

I have 5 shades that I used for the hair and shirt. The shirt only has 4 of them. I'll try changing things after I get some sleep.

jimmyjw88 · September 17, 2009, 02:24:26 am

Quote from: "Helchilde"I'll try that one and see. I might mix and match till I get the color just right.

Could I also try the red on the submission that you just posted for the Halloween contest? It looks awesome.

Erm...Actually that red is the red from Vincent Valentine. Haha. Thanks ^^
I like perfection too though. And for the portrait, the scar is looking better.

Helchilde · September 17, 2009, 02:26:28 am

Thanks for making me feel stupid. :lol:

jimmyjw88 · September 17, 2009, 02:29:18 am

Sorry about that. ^^ You could take a look with Shishi for different palettes. Perhaps, there may be a suitable red.

MiKeMiTchi · September 17, 2009, 02:29:27 am

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Hmm..

For the sprite, try changing the background color to white, or test it in-game,
to see if the colors actually fit.

Helchilde · September 17, 2009, 03:06:19 am

The colors fit pretty well. Cheetah is right about the black shirt and hair blending in with each other. I'll have edit that later.

I should be completely done with the original version by Friday, and this version by Saturday.

Afterwords, I'll work on a Chapter 2/3 and 4 version of them both.

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