Mercenaries Job Sprite Ideas (update: soon)(Image Heavy)

[Asmo X]

yes? no?

[Kagebunji]

Totaly yes, this is looking awesome! But now spine looks strange, you know it looks like it is not coming from helm.

But this is really good, this helm is fantastic.

[Seushiro]

This is my first crit on you dude. Awesome job with your idea just like all your unique concepts. . .front view looks better. . . need to chip of the two dark shades of grey to make her pointed left leg's angle look better zoomed out or in. . .  

back view needs a little more angle for the main helm or just change the lightsource. This is because the helmet is making her look upward not diagonal like its supposed to.

The spine is definitely for keeps. . . adjust the helm or move the spine a few pixels to the right so you can fix the angle of the main helm. . .

I would say yes to the Ultraman like helmet. . .

and am looking forward to your drawstring belt(<- I dnt know what this is). . .

*edit: its ok it looks better untouched for the belt anyways. . . less cluttered the better. . .

[Asmo X]

There wont be a draw string belt. It's just a superficial change

[mav]

Much better. This helmet makes more sense (to me at least), and the legs look pretty solid. This sprite matches LD's description pretty damn well: mobile, somewhat reserved, but perhaps militant.

[Asmo X]

Changed helmet, moved and reangled spine

[Seushiro]

As the Japanese would affirm it. . . Yosh!

[Kagebunji]

Veru good Asmo, this helm is great. I just sugest to add scarf from Wiegraf/Beowulf, just to see how it would look, and it would be one detail more btw.

[Asmo X]

Every sprite made in the last 4 months uses that scarf. It's old hat

[MiKeMiTchi]

Yeah! Awesome. That's more like it.

[Fein]

The scarf has no place on this sprite, it just wouldn't make sense. As I suggested yesterday, maybe see what it looks like with a breastplate? The split in the robe is a nice touch as well.

[Kagebunji]

Asmo, is there some new sprite in download section that uses scarf?? I don't think so, most sprites that uses scarfs are unfinished/abandoned projects. Well if you don't want to, it was just my sugestion.

[MiKeMiTchi]

Scarf isn't what LD wants to have...
More classic, more ok.

[Sephirot24]

Changed helmet, moved and reangled spine

Now you're talking. This is more like it Asmo. Nice shades. I like the helmet a lot. It starts shaping like a Classic Dragoon helm from the front, and has a very original twist at the back. Keep it up.

Only suggestion I'll make: can we give her long hair?

[Kagebunji]

I thought he wanted scarf, remember the Freya-like outfit? He wanted scarf back then. But it looks good without it.

I tried to add it myself, but it is quite not matching with sprite.

[Asmo X]

There is almost nothing apart from the chest to show this is female. Scarf won't work. I'd give long hair if I could but where would it go?

[Kagebunji]

How about making it geomancer-like? But those two "lines of hair"(sorry I don't remember how it is called)could flow back instead of forward.

[Sephirot24]

Two pony-tails or pig-tails hanging on the front, ala Time Mage?

[Asmo X]

I'll try your ideas soon. For now I have this

[Kagebunji]

Right pony-tails, now I remember. Well I think female geomancer or female time mage fit.