Plans for new sprites, whats everyone working on?

[mav]

Good start so far, Atma. I can't give a detailed crit at the moment, but the biggest issue with the portrait is the shading on her hair. I feel like the light source wouldn't cause such a gradient effect. Her eyes also seem little bit low, but they don't look bad at all.

Anyways, hopefully you'll get some more feedback, then we can get this thing looking great. Good luck.

[jimmyjw88]

Agreed with mav on the hair shading. Touch ups with the hair is needed as well. Face seems bit smaller, her right eye is smaller by a pixel, some shading touch ups.
Good luck.

EDIT: Something like this perhaps:

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Sketch[attachment=0:3kltphwy]Samurai - Ronin Portrait 01 - by Atma1.PNG[/attachment:3kltphwy]

[Zozma]

um.. smash help this one... the closest eye seems a pixel lower than it should be or something

[Atma]

i thought i lowered both eyes guess i undid it and didn't notice.  as for the hair, it took me about 10 seconds to paint the shading, so it's just a quick idea to let u know where i'm heading with it.  if u wanna take a stab at it go for it, even if i finish it to my liking, it may not be what u want, so anyone is welcome to do with it as they please.  
i still can't figure out why shishi lags almost to the point of crashing if u go to the animation tab, so i give up trying to fix it.  i'm just gonna usb transfer my files to my laptop and try and finish this sprite off on that.  i don't like my laptop, but at least it works without lagging like a mother fu@#er.

[jimmyjw88]

Here, fixed the eyes.
[attachment=0:25vnno76]Samurai - Ronin Portrait 01 - by Atma1.PNG[/attachment:25vnno76]I'm not sure what her characteristics are, so change the eyes if its wrong, Atma.

[Lijj]

Good. Now she doesn't look so upset.

[jimmyjw88]

I think I should change her eyebrows too. Hmm...

[GeneralStrife]

no shading on the hair...coul HNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNG

[Lijj]

Yeah JimmyJw... She still looks a little upset.. less pessimistic or defeated though.

[jimmyjw88]

no shading on the hair...

I'm aware of that. I'm fixing her face first.

Yeah JimmyJw... She still looks a little upset.. less pessimistic or defeated though.

Alright, I'll change it, make her happy!! xD
Lol.

[Atma]

i actually like how she looked all pissed off, but it doesn't really suit.  most portrait seem fairly content or optimistic.

[Lijj]

Well I don't think your serious JimmyJW. I hate smiles on FF portraits.. all of them!

[jimmyjw88]

Haha. Yeah, I was joking. Well, smiles are good, not all bad actually.

[mav]

Fix the shading on the ear, where her ponytail is. Right now she's got some elvishness going on. Looks pretty good otherwise.

[RandMuadDib]

Its a demon. Has pointy ears.

[Lijj]

Generic Female Knight:

[Kagebunji]

So you did continue her, I am happy with that . Lastly, her hair has this strange line in the middle, it doesn't look bad, but it makes her look weird, maybe it is just me. I am looking forward to this!(Remeber Mercenaries, remeber).

[Smash]

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KAGEBUNJI SAID:
When her right leg(our left) is closest to us, you can see white color on outline of skirt, I think you want it to be yellow .
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I think it's part of the boot. (Homebrew quote boxes ftl..)


This sprite looks great.

[GeneralStrife]

Liji, your generic replacers make me smile, this needs to be finished.

[Kagebunji]

Yeah, quotes fails, dunno why. Hmm, I still think it is boots but you may be right, Lijj send the BMP or tell us what it is please.