I am really liking all the little changes you're making with the storyline, I especially like the new Rad and Quinn subplots you've added, as well as your expansion of the Beowulf/Reis subplot.
:EDIT: one nitpick is that i'm not really sold on the Gerard Beastmaster character, he sort of shows up out of nowhere and then you don't do anything with him later on, so he feels rather superfluous right now.
:EDIT: one nitpick is that i'm not really sold on the Gerard Beastmaster character, he sort of shows up out of nowhere and then you don't do anything with him later on, so he feels rather superfluous right now.