It kinda looks like the "face" is hanging out of the hood, when it should be hidden in the depths of the hood.
And maybe make the part around the neck look less like a mini-cape, and more like the neck protector of a flak vest - the point being that the protective part goes around the back of the neck, the sides, and the front, and the hat sort of settles on top of that.
http://www.arniesairsoft.co.uk/reviews/retailers/flecktarn/a_flak%20jacket.jpg
http://doctorbulldog.files.wordpress.com/2008/02/mtv.gif?w=450
http://www.qm-supply.com/zenstore/images/camoflakvest.jpg
And maybe make the part around the neck look less like a mini-cape, and more like the neck protector of a flak vest - the point being that the protective part goes around the back of the neck, the sides, and the front, and the hat sort of settles on top of that.
http://www.arniesairsoft.co.uk/reviews/retailers/flecktarn/a_flak%20jacket.jpg
http://doctorbulldog.files.wordpress.com/2008/02/mtv.gif?w=450
http://www.qm-supply.com/zenstore/images/camoflakvest.jpg