P.s: Give her bigger boobs and I'll give you my full approval xD
Yup, and congrats! you've meet the author ;] and thx for the suggestion and compliment since it has not been uploaded to the public yet, I think I'll try to follow your suggestion and update it asap ;]
Title: Re: Yet another FFT Artwork from me
Post by: Xifanie on February 06, 2012, 09:56:59 pm
She looks too wide open. You should stick the legs closer to each other and give them more of an angle up to... well up there.
Title: Re: Yet another FFT Artwork from me
Post by: Kaijyuu on February 07, 2012, 12:35:45 am
Did good with the cloth parts.
Legs are a bit off as Xif mentioned.
The staff and hand holding it look a tad bit wacky. First off the fingers on the hand have weird lengths (middle finger is longest remember). Secondly you shaded part of the staff at the end, but not all of it. All the curves should have shading to give the staff depth.
Title: Re: Yet another FFT Artwork from me
Post by: Algus on February 07, 2012, 08:24:27 am
The staff and hand holding it look a tad bit wacky. First off the fingers on the hand have weird lengths (middle finger is longest remember). Secondly you shaded part of the staff at the end, but not all of it. All the curves should have shading to give the staff depth.
hm... you right :\ let see what I can do for it, will update it asap. thx for your critics, suggestion and compliment ;] I appreciate it
Title: Re: Yet another FFT Artwork from me
Post by: Algus on February 07, 2012, 12:09:13 pm
*Updated
Quote from: DomeP.s: Give her bigger boobs and I'll give you my full approval xD
Sorry Dome, It's look weird when I was made it bigger --"
Title: Re: Yet another FFT Artwork from me
Post by: Dome on February 07, 2012, 12:15:15 pm
>_>
Title: Re: Yet another FFT Artwork from me
Post by: Algus on February 08, 2012, 10:16:23 am
Don't worry Dome, I'll make a bigger boobs on the next FFT artwork ;]
Title: Re: Yet another FFT Artwork from me
Post by: Taichii on February 08, 2012, 01:09:10 pm
Title: Re: Yet another FFT Artwork from me
Post by: Lijj on February 10, 2012, 08:41:13 am
Nice drawing Algus. I like the shading with lines like that and the simplicity you kept.
Title: Re: Yet another FFT Artwork from me
Post by: Algus on February 10, 2012, 09:52:54 am
Thx for the compliment Lijj ;] well actually this is the first time for me to using line shading for my FFT artwork, I thought it would be ugly -- but it seems everyone like it ^^