Title: My first Edit...
Post by: Vangpride on July 12, 2010, 11:22:46 pm
Post by: Vangpride on July 12, 2010, 11:22:46 pm
[center:386bi2m9]Oh well just rate, lmk if its no good of decent or needs more work. I dunno if i used enough colors..but i just recolored the palette that's all.
(http://i499.photobucket.com/albums/rr353/Biggs_Vang/vicks2.png)
I have yet to try this on ShiShi..I did this on Paint. lol btw didn't feel like coloring in the portrait, was kinda hard for me.
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(http://i499.photobucket.com/albums/rr353/Biggs_Vang/vicks2.png)
I have yet to try this on ShiShi..I did this on Paint. lol btw didn't feel like coloring in the portrait, was kinda hard for me.
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Title: Re: My first Edit...
Post by: jimmyjw88 on July 13, 2010, 12:37:36 am
Post by: jimmyjw88 on July 13, 2010, 12:37:36 am
Side note:
There's no need to open another topic for sprite. You could just edit the topic.
There's no need to open another topic for sprite. You could just edit the topic.
Title: Re: My first Edit...
Post by: VampragonLord on July 13, 2010, 01:12:29 am
Post by: VampragonLord on July 13, 2010, 01:12:29 am
the portrait is a bit off, it seems too red as well, and we have WAY too many ramza copy-pastes
Title: Re: My first Edit...
Post by: Vangpride on July 13, 2010, 10:19:55 am
Post by: Vangpride on July 13, 2010, 10:19:55 am
Well it is my first edit, and i like editing a ramza i dont know why. Probably because i hate the way the story line ramza outfit looks like. I will re edit it. Yes the portion is bit off, i am currently still trying to fix that up also. Then i will get back but keep leaving comments. Thanks guys. Red armor ramza looks beast imo 
Title: Re: My first Edit...
Post by: MasterGrand on July 13, 2010, 01:07:25 pm
Post by: MasterGrand on July 13, 2010, 01:07:25 pm
Hmmm good work you are beginner & i'm sure you can do best (sprite & portrait) more then this sprite
good luck ^_^
good luck ^_^
Title: Re: My first Edit...
Post by: Vangpride on July 13, 2010, 07:59:17 pm
Post by: Vangpride on July 13, 2010, 07:59:17 pm
Thanks for your kind support i will try
Title: Re: My first Edit...
Post by: AbrasGowt on July 22, 2010, 06:18:29 pm
Post by: AbrasGowt on July 22, 2010, 06:18:29 pm
after many hours reading the tutorials. I did my first pirate sprit, if they can help me by giving his critics and saying better techniques to draw. I am grateful.
Title: Re: My first Edit...
Post by: Wolfran on July 22, 2010, 06:30:53 pm
Post by: Wolfran on July 22, 2010, 06:30:53 pm
mmm.. Abras your sprite is very interesting. First reduce the colours to 16 and try to simplify the sprite because when you have to do the rest of the posititions, the sprite will become a real pain in the ass.
Title: Re: My first Edit...
Post by: jimmyjw88 on July 22, 2010, 08:44:38 pm
Post by: jimmyjw88 on July 22, 2010, 08:44:38 pm
Remove that dark harsh outlines. That portrait...Is it for real or just avatar?
Title: Re: My first Edit...
Post by: AbrasGowt on July 23, 2010, 12:19:34 am
Post by: AbrasGowt on July 23, 2010, 12:19:34 am
I redid the stript
Title: Re: My first Edit...
Post by: GeneralStrife on July 23, 2010, 12:57:59 am
Post by: GeneralStrife on July 23, 2010, 12:57:59 am
i actually like that ramza vangpride...i can barely see it though but the coloring looks wierd, maybe a larger pic?
Title: Re: My first Edit...
Post by: jimmyjw88 on July 23, 2010, 02:15:34 am
Post by: jimmyjw88 on July 23, 2010, 02:15:34 am
1 - Where did you get the belt/sash? She seems fat.
2 - The hat is few pixels over to the left.
3 - The hand sleeves looks messed up.
4 - Fix her face (square), ear (square and outline, that brown).
2 - The hat is few pixels over to the left.
3 - The hand sleeves looks messed up.
4 - Fix her face (square), ear (square and outline, that brown).
Title: Re: My first Edit...
Post by: Vangpride on July 23, 2010, 11:18:36 am
Post by: Vangpride on July 23, 2010, 11:18:36 am
Man i've been so busy no time to Edit my sprites 
Title: Re: My first Edit...
Post by: MasterGrand on July 28, 2010, 04:53:21 pm
Post by: MasterGrand on July 28, 2010, 04:53:21 pm
No don't told you that we need you here to support for sprites , try to take few time to edite , i'm sure you can did it
Good luck ^_^ .
Good luck ^_^ .