Here's what I'm working on this night.
Because I'm having some difficulties IRL this is the only time where I can edit sprites. and I'm kinda bored with Tonberry and M BlueMage.
(http://gcstoys.com/images/product/bomesaber3.jpg)
Looks pretty good. I don't know anything about the character, but the hair needs a little work. The yellow lines on the front of her dress look a little off, I would recommend maybe making her metal skirt take up more space instead since it seems to be a rather defining feature.
yeah I may probobly take Ramza's hair.
That's awesome.

I'd say the only thing that needs work is adding the pig tails, really. In my opinion anyways.
Very nice. I agree that Ramza's hair would be a good base for her.