Poll
Question:
What do you think of it?
Option 1: Cool!
votes: 4
Option 2: Its ok...
votes: 3
Option 3: Pretty good for a first try.
votes: 9
Option 4: Could use some improvement.
votes: 1
Option 5: Horrible.
votes: 0
Option 6: You suck; it's horrible; you're useless; go die now.
votes: 1
I could use some help on this, and... well, I just started doin' this today, and I was hoping someone could rate my work.
(http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y249/Goten3620/DNKNIGHTDISPLAY.jpg)
Don't be harsh pwease xP I'm only 14, and I just started today.
I'm a newb xD
Looks pretty good, needs more colors though, and save it using a different format cause it looks grainy...
very good for a first try
more colors so it stands out in FFT maps
Thanks for the criticism, guys. I'll be working on it, and I'll be sure to try and add more color.
(In reality, its just a Ramza CH4 Edit. I recolored an Archer Armguard, Beowulf's Cape, and added the 20 yo man's face XD... also I recolored and moved some stuff around.)
It is Ramza Ch4!? Looks more like Beowulf... ;)
Where is your sprite sheet? I might use it, but... I dunno. I kinda wanted to do it on my own.
Also, I'm kinda stuck already. I can't really figure how to add more color. My only idea is adding an orange design to the armguard, but... that is it. Haha, I feel like even more of a noob, cause I need help with this; do you guys have any idea how I can add color other then adding a stupid design to the armguard? =P
Ok, I've been working on it, and I have a more updated version.
(http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y249/Goten3620/DNKNIGHTDISPLAY-1.png)
I'm debating whether or not to spread the orange designs over the entire knight, changing the design color, or maybe trying something completely different.
looks alot better with the extra color
but I feel the designs could be better and perhaps a different color altogether
Was there a particular design for the golden stripes? They look quite randomly places to look "nice".
If so, you should aim to make the edges of the armor golden instead
Looks great though.
@arch Well, what would you suggest? I'm tired and can't think right now xD Maybe change orange to dark green?
I mean HK, since that guy is helmetless, but the DK has a helmet. >_< My bad.
@ Aura; I don't know how to open that file on the custom sprite page. Do I just need to open it in MS Paint?(its the art editing program I use XD)
Here is the Destiny Knight, Gold Trimmed Armor
I personally like it, but I'm not sure its right for what the sprite is gunna be. (hes for a project I'm working on, and hes gunna be the main protagonist)
(http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y249/Goten3620/DKNIGHTDISPLAY.png)
You use Shishi Sprite Editor which comes with FFT Patcher which is on the downloads page.
I have it downloaded, but I'm not sure how to open the sprite sheet still xP
looks good
much better now
Open the .SPR in ShiShi, and export it as a bmp.
It's under file.
Also, this looks great!
@Kaze; well, I got a different version that let me open it right, so... now when I try to export it, it cuts off the bottom of the sprite sheet. Do I need to change the sprite type before I export it or something?(ARUTE.SHP, TYPE1.SHP, etc.)
EDIT: Nevermind, I didn't see that it was just improperly aligned. I get it, it has it all, just not properly aligned... How do I export it properly aligned?
.....very large portrait.
New Sprite; Ramza- Aged 20-30 years(so now hes 40-50 years old)
(http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y249/Goten3620/OLDRAMZADISPLAY.png)
I like this one very much o.O you might just be my spriting hero.
haha, well... I changed it a little bit. I chane change it back if you like the old one better. But, I'm trying to depict Ramza, aged 20-30 years, remember that.
(http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y249/Goten3620/OLDRAMZADISPLAY-1.png)
much improved.
you're getting better already
Algus, The Shrine Knight. You guessed it, Algus will be back in my Patch.
(http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y249/Goten3620/ALGUSSHRINESIDPLAY-1.png)
That' pretty cool! That would have made a waaay better Fell Knight Algus!
And it still proves all 183 of my Algus is a douche theories.
I can tell a lot of people are gunna 'love' Algus being back. Mainly because you get to kill him 'again' XD
YES!! we all love killing that SoB.
haha, my Avatar is now that SoB.
This is the portrait I'm using for him.
Nice look for him but when you post this patch my main goal is to own him to hell and back again then for the hell of launch into kick him through a quidditch goal. At which point my ass will grow wings and fly me into space.
this is what algus looks like in my patch lol
the ass, becomes the innocent bystander
At least he still dies.
His depressing "Poor Me" look makes me want to kill him even more.
try making him smile xD then he'd look really innocent.
haha, sweet, well don't worry he dies in Tietra's place under the same circumstances
Quote from: "Zozma"haha, sweet, well don't worry he dies in Tietra's place under the same circumstances
Zozma has just become my hero lol.
Haha, Zozma have you seen this on the Japanese Site?
http://fft.nm.land.to/cgi-bin/src/up0112.png (http://fft.nm.land.to/cgi-bin/src/up0112.png)
yeah they found my screenshot didnt they, they must have explored out site a few times.
I finished my Algus sprite =D
I'll be submitting it today after I test it.
... You're a witch, you know that? =P
mwahahaa... maybe i am
What?!?
hoorayness! I got my first frame of my new sprite done... of me.
(http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y249/Goten3620/ZalgeDisplay-1.png)
hey, tahts excellent zalge
Crap, I think I may need to do some color fixing, I just remembered I have to have one color for background...I'll try changing the trimming to Blue and the gloves and shoes to brown, then I'll only be using two blue shades...
I'm afraid he wont stand out well though, his armor/clothes/whatever is kinda dark, and so is his hair.
looks nice z
Thanks Zozma, I should have the walking animations done soon, then I'll do up the arms tommorrow
Arms are extremely teadious and hard to get working...i suggest zalbags arms for the sprite...but you may have already used a sprite with compatable arms, so ill keep meh mouth shut.
Quote from: "SentinalBlade"Arms are extremely teadious and hard to get working...i suggest zalbags arms for the sprite...but you may have already used a sprite with compatable arms, so ill keep meh mouth shut.
Zalbag is my base sprite xD Sadly, most of this is just a recolor, despite whether it looks good or not. So, I'l just going to be recoloring his arms that are already on the sheet.
haha, i guess i have a good eye then

i dont see zalbag much in sprite sheet form, so i never payed to much attention to him. if you ahdnt told me, i wouldnt have guessed this was mostly a recolor ;P you did a very convincing job on it
Quote from: "SentinalBlade"haha, i guess i have a good eye then 
i dont see zalbag much in sprite sheet form, so i never payed to much attention to him. if you ahdnt told me, i wouldnt have guessed this was mostly a recolor ;P you did a very convincing job on it
Well, I changed the hair and added a little piece to the trimming running under his chest, instead of just looping on the sides, around his arms.
cool. when i saw it, something abour the torso seemed unfamiliar when you mentioned that it was zalbag...then again i just wrote myself off as playing so much FFT you get confused.
I got a bit more done =D
(http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y249/Goten3620/ZalgeDunraDisplay.png)
Screw it, it won't stop being fuzzy in the very small versions. I'm not sure what I'm gunna do with that back facing one... the hair just doesn't look right.
Use the hair from Zozma's hatless thief.
Quote from: "Cheetah"Use the hair from Zozma's hatless thief.
Why? I'm trying to make his hair medium lengthed, like mine. Not short and kinda poofy...
Go die somewhere...just joking! Its pretty cool I think.
Well I think using the hatless thief's hair as a reference would be useful. You are trying to do too much from scratch right now and the hair is missing a lot of detail. Just an idea.
yea, it needs another color...soem more depth

its fine right now, but it looks kinda like when you make a circular eliptical in MS pain and just paint one color into the circle...lol
Ha, I tried to make my own portrait, but failed quite epically. I could use some help if anyone would give some.
give the hair one more color, simply use one of the skin tones for a sheen.
then its all good
oh wait, im talking about the sprite hair, not the portrait
Quote from: "Zozma"give the hair one more color, simply use one of the skin tones for a sheen.
then its all good
I think I need to eliminate one more color =P I'm pretty sure it has 16 colors without the background one. How do you suggest I get rid of another color? I'll try something...
Looks like you used some programs color reduction instead of doing it by hand. I would recommend going back and doing more color reduction on your own and then having the program figure out the rest for you. Plus I just noticed those two blue stripes on the armor and those look horrible.
he has more than 16 right now? hmm youll have to improvise then, perhaps one of the greys. as annoying as it is to only have white used for 2 pixels per frame id say dont sacrifice that one tho.
Quote from: "Cheetah"Looks like you used some programs color reduction instead of doing it by hand. I would recommend going back and doing more color reduction on your own and then having the program figure out the rest for you. Plus I just noticed those two blue stripes on the armor and those look horrible.
Yeah... I'll be removing the stripes. That will save color room... And, I actually did do the color reduction by hand =P
Post a version with more colors and I will take a look at it.
Nevermind Cheetah, I removed the blue stripes. I was putting them on because the sprite has them, and I was thinking I should put them on the make the portrait look more like the Zalbag portrait, but it doesn't matter anymore cause it looked stupid.
Anyway, it freed up two colors, so I could correctly shade my portrait and make the eyes look much better.
Not bad Zalge, but the pupils look kinda huge on it... zozmas/cheetahs are kindy more conservative with the size of their eyes... lol that sounds really weird...
Looks much better Zalge, good work. What Sentinal Blade says about the eyes is pretty true, but it might just be the original Ramza portrait.