Title: Gin Sutoraifu Sprite Concept
Post by: DarthPaul on November 04, 2008, 03:17:27 pm
Post by: DarthPaul on November 04, 2008, 03:17:27 pm
Well this is the concept havent finished the portrait yet using zack as a template and uh yea no palette yet
criticism welcome and expected
criticism welcome and expected
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Post by: Jacob31593 on November 04, 2008, 05:38:05 pm
Post by: Jacob31593 on November 04, 2008, 05:38:05 pm
dont know who it is but it looks pretty cool, but i think the shading looks kinda dark in comparison to his hair color
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Post by: DarthPaul on November 04, 2008, 05:41:13 pm
Post by: DarthPaul on November 04, 2008, 05:41:13 pm
oh right should also mention that my name is Gin Sutoraifu so you could call it the DarthPaul sprite
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Post by: Cheetah on November 04, 2008, 07:40:11 pm
Post by: Cheetah on November 04, 2008, 07:40:11 pm
Are you trying to make his hair white? You really need to be taking your colors from other sprites to start off to get good tones and shading.
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Post by: Dormin Jake on November 04, 2008, 08:21:26 pm
Post by: Dormin Jake on November 04, 2008, 08:21:26 pm
Your name's Gin Sutoraifu? Related to Cloud, yeah?
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Post by: DarthPaul on November 04, 2008, 11:19:27 pm
Post by: DarthPaul on November 04, 2008, 11:19:27 pm
i actually did look for the hair colors but im trying to do a black wait fade since that is what my hair does right now
and i hope im related to cloud
and i hope im related to cloud
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Post by: DarthPaul on November 15, 2008, 11:19:47 pm
Post by: DarthPaul on November 15, 2008, 11:19:47 pm
This picture is the update concept i shall be building my sprite off of.
As always criticism or whatever welcome.
As always criticism or whatever welcome.
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Post by: AuraDragon on November 16, 2008, 11:28:44 pm
Post by: AuraDragon on November 16, 2008, 11:28:44 pm
Cool. 
I like the sprite, the draw is also good, but the right hand needs to be bigger for perspective and... humans have 4 fingers, not 3. xD
I like the sprite, the draw is also good, but the right hand needs to be bigger for perspective and... humans have 4 fingers, not 3. xD
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Post by: DarthPaul on November 16, 2008, 11:39:03 pm
Post by: DarthPaul on November 16, 2008, 11:39:03 pm
I didn't noticed the hand perspective thanks for pointing that out, and in my sketches of this style I prefer 3 fingers over 4 to keep the hand from looking fucked up(maybe I should work on that for the future).
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Post by: Zozma on November 17, 2008, 08:57:42 pm
Post by: Zozma on November 17, 2008, 08:57:42 pm
hey i havent criticized your sprite yet, are you ready? 
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Post by: DarthPaul on November 17, 2008, 09:03:31 pm
Post by: DarthPaul on November 17, 2008, 09:03:31 pm
Bring it I'm always ready to get reamed by the master.
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Post by: Zozma on November 17, 2008, 09:04:57 pm
Post by: Zozma on November 17, 2008, 09:04:57 pm
the hair jumps from black to white no blending or anything, is it supposed to be that way? the white is pretty bright XD
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Post by: DarthPaul on November 17, 2008, 10:06:38 pm
Post by: DarthPaul on November 17, 2008, 10:06:38 pm
The reason for the lack of blending is laziness, I didn't feel like changing the palette to accommodate another shade.
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Post by: Zozma on November 17, 2008, 10:09:22 pm
Post by: Zozma on November 17, 2008, 10:09:22 pm
but it MUST!!! well it doesnt have to but....
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Post by: DarthPaul on November 17, 2008, 10:11:30 pm
Post by: DarthPaul on November 17, 2008, 10:11:30 pm
I guess so I but that bridge will be passed when I get to it (see new post in Mercenaries art).
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Post by: Zozma on November 19, 2008, 08:11:58 pm
Post by: Zozma on November 19, 2008, 08:11:58 pm
you must cross it now, or go over the side
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Post by: DarthPaul on November 19, 2008, 09:23:28 pm
Post by: DarthPaul on November 19, 2008, 09:23:28 pm
I got an orthopedic thingamabob that should allow me to fix the hair problem (to make Zozma happy) and don't suggest falling off a bridge I'm at a low point right now and would do just that. (but all the bridges here have suicide fences on the bridges)
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Post by: Zozma on November 19, 2008, 09:25:27 pm
Post by: Zozma on November 19, 2008, 09:25:27 pm
no dont do that :)
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Post by: DarthPaul on November 19, 2008, 09:26:21 pm
Post by: DarthPaul on November 19, 2008, 09:26:21 pm
Don't worry I'm fixing it.
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Post by: Zozma on November 19, 2008, 09:29:07 pm
Post by: Zozma on November 19, 2008, 09:29:07 pm
didnt u hurt ur hand? how u doin?
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Post by: DarthPaul on November 19, 2008, 09:30:46 pm
Post by: DarthPaul on November 19, 2008, 09:30:46 pm
Fine that why I have an orthopedic mouse rig.