Title: yea... this is my first portrait, so what do you think...
Post by: RolyTunedIn on September 29, 2008, 10:32:06 am
Post by: RolyTunedIn on September 29, 2008, 10:32:06 am
i was wondering what do you guys think? anything negative or positive...
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Post by: KazeKasano on September 29, 2008, 11:06:35 am
Post by: KazeKasano on September 29, 2008, 11:06:35 am
The mustache looks a tiny bit off, but other than that, it's good.
I like the hair color, especially.
I like the hair color, especially.
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Post by: DarthPaul on September 29, 2008, 11:14:16 am
Post by: DarthPaul on September 29, 2008, 11:14:16 am
Quote from: "KazeKasano"The mustache looks a tiny bit off
this coming from mr. feathers in the hair lol jk
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Post by: RolyTunedIn on September 29, 2008, 12:27:22 pm
Post by: RolyTunedIn on September 29, 2008, 12:27:22 pm
thanks ill try to work on it more... but is it the the color of it or something else?...but other than that is there anything else wrong with it?
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Post by: DarthPaul on September 29, 2008, 12:36:33 pm
Post by: DarthPaul on September 29, 2008, 12:36:33 pm
the mustache seems to swing down too far and too early but that might just be me
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Post by: Cheetah on September 29, 2008, 12:54:56 pm
Post by: Cheetah on September 29, 2008, 12:54:56 pm
Darthpaul is right, the angle of the stach is a bit off. I'm not sure what color you want his hair to be, but right now it just kind of looks blueish gray. I think you need more pixels of the lighter shades of the hair color. Overall the design is good and good overall for a first attempt. You are just missing a few details and shading stuff.
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Post by: RolyTunedIn on September 29, 2008, 01:16:53 pm
Post by: RolyTunedIn on September 29, 2008, 01:16:53 pm
okay thanks cheetah... i didnt see it at first but when you mentioned "angle" it made more sense... 
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Post by: DarthPaul on September 29, 2008, 02:43:59 pm
Post by: DarthPaul on September 29, 2008, 02:43:59 pm
who is this pic based off of or is a made from scratch
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Post by: RolyTunedIn on September 29, 2008, 11:42:46 pm
Post by: RolyTunedIn on September 29, 2008, 11:42:46 pm
i based it off of dycedarg...
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Post by: DarthPaul on September 30, 2008, 01:01:18 am
Post by: DarthPaul on September 30, 2008, 01:01:18 am
ah yes i think i see it now
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Post by: KazeKasano on September 30, 2008, 11:39:01 pm
Post by: KazeKasano on September 30, 2008, 11:39:01 pm
I see it.
And like the others said, it's the angle on the 'stache.
Also, it might be a tad too thick.
And like the others said, it's the angle on the 'stache.
Also, it might be a tad too thick.
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Post by: Jacob31593 on October 18, 2008, 03:00:55 pm
Post by: Jacob31593 on October 18, 2008, 03:00:55 pm
Quote from: "KazeKasano"I see it.thats what i noticed, i dont see anything wrong with the angle though
Also, it might be a tad too thick.
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Post by: RolyTunedIn on October 21, 2008, 11:24:09 pm
Post by: RolyTunedIn on October 21, 2008, 11:24:09 pm
well the angle depends on how you look at it... i see it both ways... but im still working on it...
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Post by: AuraDragon on October 22, 2008, 12:01:06 am
Post by: AuraDragon on October 22, 2008, 12:01:06 am
Eyes are flat, beard is rotated right by like 5 or so degrees, throws off the image, the hair needs to blend better, and the beard looks scruffy, and the dark area behind the head could be refined to make it look easier on the eyes...
Being truth full, unless you want me to say "Looks Awesome!"... O.o
Being truth full, unless you want me to say "Looks Awesome!"... O.o