Final Fantasy Hacktics

no celdia is right. perhaps extending the dark color used on her dress to show separation between the legs would make a tighter-looking, younger outfit rather than a baggy granny gown.
the back views look pretty good imo

back view is great. looks like the back of the wizard, but narrowed up a bit.

Every good start and I would definitely take most of the advice given so far. She is a little plain looking though and needs something else going on. I would recommend throwing some purple in there, either a belt or some designs.

Thanks for the tips, here's what I've done with them.
[Edit:] top one is most recent.

Better. I like the change to the back particularly though I can't say why...the pattern on the front helps a lot though.

The pattern on the front feels to native american.... the back just looks awesome. you did a great job on that bottom right one.
Did you bring her chest up any? it doesnt seem they got bigger...hmm...

I would use a purple from the hair for a design on the front. white and purple mix relativly well iwth one of the shades from her head.

SB, look closely at the difference on the second sprite (forward-diagonal). Its a little different.

yeap, i got it thanks celdia

straight forward sprite still looks grandma-ish but the others looks awesome. straight forward isn't used as often as most anyway though

Great progress. I actually like the front design idea. Both designs are fine, it is more that I like having a design on the front and leaving the back alone. The back view in general gets a bit cluttered with the design, in addition to what I think you are trying to do to make the butt more defined. Try having the design be purple, I think you have plenty of colors to try it.

Hmm, I might use this sprite for the female Invoker if you don't mind of course.

Of course LastingDawn I'd be flattered. She's supposed to be a magic user.
Tried with a little purple.

The purple works. Makes the back look more like a design and less like a lighting thing. I'm curious to see how the front will look for the walking frames though.

yeah I haven't tried putting the design on the walking frames yet.

I would recommend lightening up the purple a bit. I like the simpler back design as well, lower it one pixel though. This is a very unique sprite, I'm loving it. My only final concern is the rear-side view compared to the rear view. That line around the waste on the rear-side view doesn't really seem to carry over to the rear view or any other view really. It seems like you need to make the rear-side view look like it is a continuous dress like the other frames, while maintaining the slender shape of the character's body.

pretty cool. i guess i should get back to work myself

Either lightne the purple, or darken the brown, the brown is a bit contrasting for it. You might end up doing both.

I really like how that purple design will look a bit lighter. your doing a great job.

Also, i like the back, but Celdia is right. to much lighting/shading not enough design flow.

i sort of liked the white design better than the purple one really..

you might have extra colors but ive made sprites before like bolmna, that dont use all 16 colors...

She looks quite awesome. I think i may use it too...

Quote from: "Srekciv"Of course LastingDawn I'd be flattered. She's supposed to be a magic user.
Tried with a little purple.

I'm loving the new racial sprite.

Very nice.

xD