Final Fantasy Hacktics

this is the only closest i can get for marche's front. most other pictures that i've seen are fan art.

Yeah, for this Izlude the mouth is slightly angled on the portrait, which makes a weird effect when seen with the longer hair.

And the hood should dangle a little lower on both the back and backward-diagonal. It's hanging up ever so slightly.

It looks ok seushiro, its just that the gold lines shouldn't be so straight. The reason some of izlude's cloak is light green is because  part of it angles out and catches the light. You should try to follow this curvature with the lines too.

Thanks Roly sure will use that pic as reference. . . Hmmn. . . dnt like heroes in shorts though but oh well. . .

Thanks for the tip Asmo will see how to make them curve. . . i thought the difference in color will help. ..

On that artwork they look really childish, good work on making Marche look serious Seushiro.

Quote from: "RolyTunedIn"it looks good. but on the portrait the mouth angle bothers me... other than that, nice outfit design, only thing that bothers me for the sprite is his hood.

Hmmn. . .  yeah the hood does look like a floating pillow. . . really ruins the back view. . .

i dont know if it just happens to me seushiro, but when i tried to insert your sprites into shishi, it says that the size of the file is too big... i noticed that when i downloaded your sprites, it was 64 kb while the others were 44. and do you mind uploading the new portrait for him, that bang in the middle looks funny lol...

Quote from: "Kagebunji"On that artwork they look really childish, good work on making Marche look serious Seushiro.

well he is around 12 i think...

He looks like girl, about Ritz I don't mind, but Marche...

Izlude version 2 with Delita's Arm gear and 3 shades of green from an oracle palette to make the green match the portrait a bit. . .

*at the bottom is the fixed Reno for u Roly

just a concept. . . I screwed up one of my bleach edits cuz it was over 16 colors and now would take hours to repair. . .

Messed with my ninja instead. . .

Give a darkest shade (in this case, black for Strider's hair. (for the lower part of the hair)
Your concepts are really great Seu!! That's why I like you. hahaha..
But your weakness is in the hair..

yeah still picking which color i can ditch from the blues or the whites. . . im stuck at 16 already. . .

atleast i did better there then this Iron Man I made ^__^

that Ramza is Knox's

Nice! You made a Strider Hiryuu. ^_^

Haha that Iron Man is hilarious, very nice. I'm loving those vertical lines on Izlude, great touch.

That ninja concept is looking good except for the hair, like Mike said. The Iron Man is funny, and very nice. Izlude is looking great too. Well done.

Is this better Mike?

Added the belt from Rofel. . .

Yes, that's better. I suggest you add one more shade for the hair.
And make it the lightest. Get it from the skin tone if you're not aiming for multiple palettes.

IMO, it needs more lighter brown shades than the darker one, or just make the lightest brown shade for the hair
less-saturated..

Hmm.. I'm not really good at explaining..
but.. I can try editing the hair a bit if you don't mind, then you continue there.

The whites of the eyes need some help, too.

thanks seu, but when i try to download it, the sprite size is 64 kb. so it won't let me import it into shishi... am i the only one having this problem?... but thanks anyway seushiro.