Twinees' Sprites

[Kill_Bones]

Nice! I only see one small thing on the port that's bugging me. On her left (our right) suspender, a couple white pixels go into the brown, making it look rather odd. The walking frames look great, although, like cheetah, I'm not a fan of the shoulders atm

[GeneralStrife]

I know the port is a WIP, but the front part of her hair (the bangs) look like a hand, but like you said, WIP.

[Twinees]

Thank you guys, those little white pixel were supposed to represent a buckle, but it didnt turn out well.
Hopefully i fixed that hand/claw thing that was happening with her bangs.


Might have to change the tip of the bangs.

Edit:

[GeneralStrife]

Thank you guys, those little white pixel were supposed to represent a buckle, but it didnt turn out well.
Hopefully i fixed that hand/claw thing that was happening with her bangs.


Might have to change the tip of the bangs.

Edit:

That's alot better. The one on the right's hair is much better.

[Twinees]

thankyou GS, heres another update:


I will be darkening the hair after its finished, as suggested by several people.

[Lijj]

There's a spot on her throat where the shadow and light meet that doesn't look quite right where the neck meets the collar area.

edit: typos

[Cheetah]

Fantastic looking portrait. You have already made improvements and the few things I have noticed so far. You already worked on blending the bangs in so they look more natural from the part, but I think it needs a bit more work. The shading of the hair for the hanging down bits don't look quite right to me, but I'm not sure how to improve it. This is very very close to being perfect.

[Zozma]

whoa thats amazing, i love it!

[dbp]

This character is going to be amazing !!!!!!!!
Love the portrait so far !

I can really feel that she's Tifa but with the exact perfect FFT style.
Good job 

[Cheetah]

Aha, I think I know what is up with the hair. You have a black/dark line around all her hair, this definitely shouldn't be the case when it is facing directly towards the light source. Right? I think I gave similar feedback to the Red XIII portrait and it looked way better afterwords.

[Twinees]

Hmm... this getting any better?
I got rid of the attempt at a collarbone (thanks lijj)

[Cheetah]

YES, much better. Move the shoulder on the left one pixel down. That is the end of my feedback.

[Twinees]

I will get back to work on the sprite when possible.

[Cheetah]

It's so good, I love it. You continue to shock and amaze me with your spriting skills.

[Twinees]

Thanks Cheetah, i appreciate your kind words. So I darkened the hair, which do you guys prefer?

[Dome]

The one on the right

[Cheetah]

Haha, I like the one on the left. Any chance of a black haired version just to sooth the fanboys.

[Kagebunji]

Pixel-wise I pick brighter version. So I vote for left. You will get FF7 project done in no-time As we spoke on chat some time ago, I still am secretly hoping you will do Rufus, since he is damn awesome.

[Zozma]

i like the left one best too

[Kill_Bones]

I like the left one tbh. This looks amazing either way Twin, nice job.

I can't imagine Rude and Elena being hard to do next. But I think I remember you saying you were doing the main party first.