Magus from CT

[jimmyjw88]

I think you're missing few pixels for the shoulder.

[ChronosAragami]

It's just the bigger view, try increasing the original and you will see that the shoulders are in place.

[ChronosAragami]

Here.

[MiKeMiTchi]

Haha.. That's too big for me.
Okay, I'll prepare a sample..

[Asmo X]

Your palettes are all wrong. If you want a blue palette for the cape, find one in the sprite database. Right now you have 2 blues that are almost identical and then a huge leap to the dark one.

[MiKeMiTchi]

14 colors total,
based from Delita's hair, head, body and legs, and Male Knight's cape and arms.

You can add 2 more colors. Maybe for the violet and reds.
And, you can change the skin tone, too, If you want.

[ChronosAragami]

I think this boy was very pale to me, but I think I can take advantage of colors used for the cape, hands and feet.

[ChronosAragami]

Here my attempt.

[Vanya]

You're blowing it up too much now.
Only do like x3 at most.
Right now I can't give an opinion, 'cause all I see is a bunch of colored blocks.

[Xifanie]

Here's a tip Vanya: walk 40-60 feet away from your monitor.

[SilvasRuin]

I don't believe I have a room big enough to position myself for a proper perspective.

[ChronosAragami]

sorry ^_^

[KazeKasano]

Mike has the right idea here, Chronos. The skin tone being like that is just a necessary sacrifice. But this looks like it could turn out great if given the proper effort.

[SilvasRuin]

I don't believe that is "necessary" at all.  I don't believe even Mike filled up the palette.

Surely there's still space in the palette to fit in a black color like what MiKeMiTchi used for the inside of the cape.  Also, the chest area looks rather flat.  The shading/positioning of some of the pixels could use some work there.

[ChronosAragami]

Ok, let me get this straight, I should add a dark background to the cape and maybe change the skin tone!?

[SilvasRuin]

Yeah, it's just that you have a ton of purple in that image.  That dark color mike used to shade the cape would help break that monotony in the color, and it would look right since the underside of the cape would naturally be shadowed.

[ChronosAragami]

Like this ??

[SilvasRuin]

Your image is a bit big, but yes, I think that looks better.

[ChronosAragami]

Ok, now the face, what i could be making here?

[ChronosAragami]

I'm doing it based on the 3D version of it, so I'm doing it with light skin, not enough to be gray.