Chocokin

[digitaldragoon]

Ok, here is the long ago promised (on spam no less) Chocokin Female first look.  Critiques are definitely welcome since I am not far into the sheet as a whole.

[jimmyjw88]

Lol ^^
It looks bit funny =p
Maybe because i can't imagine a chocobo head on a human body =)
Anyway, is that a chocobo helmet or head?
Because the first and the second, kinda looks a helmet because there are a pixel or two of human face palettes near its eyes.
Also, the fourth's eyes looks like its looking back.
Sorry about the comment. Just wondering ^^

[digitaldragoon]

Comment is totally appreciated Jimmy.

The more I look at it, the more the choco helm looks like the oversized head that Rock wears in Soul Caliber.  I'm thinking of changing this to a smaller, more stylized helmet rather than the full sized head.

Maybe the large head would look better on the male...

[jimmyjw88]

Ah...it's a helmet ^^
Yea. Agreed ^^

[jimmyjw88]

Hey, erm...do you know how to change a skill, like a spell, from casting like a mage to strike with sword like beowulf?

[digitaldragoon]

Sorry, not sure on the programming side. This will actually be my first full sprite to date if I finish it.

I have shrunk the helmet a bit and I'm happier with the results.

[jimmyjw88]

Oh..i see.
Okay then ^^
Looks better ^^
Nice ^^

[Cheetah]

I actually really prefer the first versions, the second wants look really uneven and odd. My recommendation to make the first ones look better would be to keep the size, but make it look more like a metal helmet. So expose a bit more of the characters face in a majority of the frames, and then change the feathers so that they are less fluffy and going in all directions and more like spikes.

[gojoe]

i agree if its akin to chocobos they wouldnt skin em for the helms

[SilvasRuin]

Is their skin red, or is that just the helmet making it look like that?  Skin or faceguard, if it wasn't red then it would stand out better and look less like a Chocobo's head sewed on to a human's body.

[AuraDragon]

CHOCOBO WARRIORS! YAR!

[SentinalBlade]

Red = Red Chocobo, Silvas

Im glad you picked this thing up again . but agreedm the first ones did look less like you killed a chocobo and placed its skull on top of yours~

[Wolfran]

Hey Guys, I have this version of chocokin...

[mav]

First thing, Wolfran: your color choices have led to an astonishing lack of depth (especially on the armor). Secondly, the "eyes" on the helmets look strange. Take a cue from the male or female Lancers and imitate those. This is pretty decent otherwise.

[GeneralStrife]

I like your necro wolfran,

[jimmyjw88]

Agreed, and fix that square chin/face.

[Smash]

Eeehh..


Whats so great about mutant overgrown chicken anyway..? Like pikachu, it's just a lame forced signature character by square's part


Real men mount real fucking steeds

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(I know it's useless, but it was fun to sprite)

[jimmyjw88]

Holyshit!!

PONY!!!

[Smash]

Pfft pony.. It's a real mans steed!



Unless someone figures out how to edit alignments on sprites, this won't be anything more than a dream.. Or perhaps an un-mountable monster sprite.

[jimmyjw88]

Agreed. Though, it could fit in monster sheet.

EDIT: You said it before I could.