Shishi Works Jobs and Zodiacs

[shishi-sensou]

now im redesing the Asura
Fow now is blond then brown

[Kagebunji]

Oh shit, it looks amazing now. I totally dig the blonde version. Great job on this!

[RandMuadDib]

Oh shit, it looks amazing now. I totally dig the blonde version. Great job on this!

^^^ this

[Cheetah]

Significantly better portrait. The eyes look a little small, and there is one strand of hair in the front that is going straight up. Otherwise a huge improvement and looking quite good.

[shishi-sensou]

Significantly better portrait. The eyes look a little small, and there is one strand of hair in the front that is going straight up. Otherwise a huge improvement and looking quite good.

Yah is my idea xDDlooks good?

[GeneralStrife]

I think he made the eyes like that to emphasize the asianish.

[shishi-sensou]

I think he made the eyes like that to emphasize the asianish.

ya Asasin Style =)

[Cheetah]

If that is what you were going for than it is working pretty well. They eyes still look a bit off, but I couldn't tell you exactly what it is.

[shishi-sensou]

now brown

[Kagebunji]

I like the Asian eyes a lot, so these aren't an issue for me really. Brown version is working as well. Just remember to fix the eyes on sprite.

[shishi-sensou]

finished
in V 2.0

[Wolfran]

In the fourth pallete of the sprite the background is white instead of black (RGB 000). And in the second pallete of the portrait is all messed.

[Lijj]

I like your sprite work so far quite a lot. She's fancy-schmancy!!

[shishi-sensou]

I like your sprite work so far quite a lot. She's fancy-schmancy!!

Is male!!!!!! ><
And its not a job onli need 1 pallete Right?
4 paletes for uds Uu

[Lijj]

 

Still very nice.

[shishi-sensou]

Hana Portrait

[Kagebunji]

Wow, I really like the hair here. Few things though, overall the portrait is quite dark, black hair, black clothes etc., since on sprite her clothes are white, why don't you change clothes on portrait to white as well? other things are the eyes, they don't look bad, but don't look good either. My advice is to use Balmafula's eyes and base it off that, follow the FFT style more. And make the mouth more visible, the pixels used for it are very light and make mouth almost not visible on normal view. The last thing is more of a question than a crit, you see on sprite her hair seems kinda short, but on portrait it is medium long, you may want to shorten it here and there. Other than these, it's a really nice piece of art!

[shishi-sensou]

Wow, I really like the hair here. Few things though, overall the portrait is quite dark, black hair, black clothes etc., since on sprite her clothes are white, why don't you change clothes on portrait to white as well? other things are the eyes, they don't look bad, but don't look good either. My advice is to use Balmafula's eyes and base it off that, follow the FFT style more. And make the mouth more visible, the pixels used for it are very light and make mouth almost not visible on normal view. The last thing is more of a question than a crit, you see on sprite her hair seems kinda short, but on portrait it is medium long, you may want to shorten it here and there. Other than these, it's a really nice piece of art!

should focus more on the sprite is black neck and the edges of the kimono are red

[jimmyjw88]

Interesting piece of portrait. For the hair, you need to shorten her right side to match with her sprite.

EDIT - Or you could swap with her left.

[Kagebunji]

Ah, true, her neck is black on the sprite. Well that solves the problem I guess. Looking forward for updates.