Final Fantasy Hacktics

Lol I'm honored, FDC and hurry up and put your signature into your profile!

hmm. i think my effort looks really sloppy actually  ok i'll definitely try again, but should i make it thicker and should i adjust the opacity?

Lol she is a character from the tekken franchise ^^

this is one of my early attempts at calligraphy.
is it okay or is it down-right shitty?

if i am not busy then i may try it, though i cannot confirm.

(Y) i like your sig, FDC 

thank You FDC! i will definitely fix it ASAP

Lol how are you even able to understand what teyre saying? o.o

Thank you Kage and RedWorld! and no redworld, nobody is forcing anything down my throat, who gave you that idea? I appreciate all forms of legitimate criticism but simultaneously I have to keep the drawing true to Jun's identity which is why unfortunately not all of the criticism can be implemented :/ however I have done my best to understand what others have been telling me about the drawing and so to the best of my abilities I have tried to improve the drawing based on the feedback I received.

lol basically Kage I just made the hair darker so it's opacity would seem more realistic.
And yea the ear was kinda hard, but the hands.. ~.~
And redworld, I am not certain where I am supposed to insert this line you're suggesting. Do I put it in between the breasts or do I put it above the right breast?

But.. I did use a 2B O.O for the whole drawing!

Lol no! Dont delete the post! I appreciate your comprehensive review ^^
anyway I agree with you Im fixing the ear,
Tho she has a long nose so I can only stretch it up to the tip of her nose..
Otherwise it will look too long.
And DAMN you were spot on about the hands.. They were a nightmare..
I Don't think I'll be touching the boobs too much.. Maybe I'll edit it a bit,
Tell me if it'll look any better.
I don't think I'll touch the nose.
Thanks for your feedback!

Lol thanks for your views! not too sure about the proportions cuz I've asked a few people and they think she looks balanced (if u asked me I think I made her too fat ) but anyway you may be right about the arms, I'll definitely consider your opinions if I make another drawing.

I know, this forum's mainly about Final Fantasy.. but Lijj wanted me to post this drawing so he could see it.
This is Jun Kazama from the Tekken Franchise, i dont own her  
Hope you folks like the drawing!  
:EDIT:
I've put in a new picture where i have listened to reviews from several parties
namely Kage, Redworld, Xif, Celdia, and Lijj (if you have given me feedback and I've taken your advice but I haven't listed your name then please let me know so I can give you credit. A lot of people have given me feedback and I'm sorry I can't remember all of them :/)
i have therefore adjusted the following :
the eyebrows
the ear
the right hand
the breasts
the overall darkness of the picture

:EDIT (again ~.~):
seeing there were still some a certain few flaws, i have decided to edit the drawing again.
This time i've changed:
the mouth
the chin
the collar bone (not sure if i did this one right, because i was unable to understand others' instructions on how to fix it)
the eyes
the hair (i've made the four loose strands of hairs on both sides symmetrical)

*note* i may edit the boobs again, but that depends on redworld. i'll need clarification on his lates feedback because
i'm not entirely certain which part of the breast he would like me to alter :S

Have a nice day!

the links to the old pictures :
Version 3.1  http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/3044/jun31.jpg
Version 3.32 http://img687.imageshack.us/img687/285/jun332.jpg

(i do not mind criticism, just make sure that it is justified)

Alrite do u know the event where cloud appears in goug for the first time? Yeah its kinda rotten that it happens so late in the game  so how can u trigger that event and all the other corresponding events earlier so he can join the party earlier as well? (applies to beowulf and reis as well) Can it be done with FFTPatcher? if not what program might i need?