Lenneth

[Kagebunji]

Hey, now looks great! Her skirt improved, but it look like it is dirt, maybe light it up? Try to delete that light square on helmet, it look somewhat strange.

[ArkDelgato]

Used the lighter eye color for skirt, the darker one for shading.
Better?

[Kagebunji]

It resembles Lenneth skirt now a lot, it loks perfect! But something is strange going on with the skirt, hmm I don't know how to say it, so I will post img late.

[ArkDelgato]

It could be the gold trim not showing up...
If I use the brown it looks like a leather belt...
Should I try a darker gold?

[Zalge]

The right side of the skirt looks like its going over the left part but there is no shading on that edge. Its probably because the right part of the skirt seems to go over onto the other side, not that the left side is moved out that way. It just looks awkward.

[mav]

Work on the blues...something looks off. Borrow from the blue Minotaur sprite (Sacred was the enemy's name, if I recall correctly). And work on the skirt thing...it looks like it's not resting on her legs/leggings properly. The purple outline is harsh too. Keep working on it--I have a feeling that you can make this work after some due diligence.

[ArkDelgato]

(trying to correct the skirt for now, will get to the harsh purple later)

[GeneralStrife]

This will be a cool sprite when its finished.

[SilvasRuin]

Wow, that is some extreme improvement from what I saw last.  Great job so far.

[Kagebunji]

Thi is exactly what I meant, now just make her leg-armor smaller, so it will resemble the original.

[MiKeMiTchi]

Looks better.

Just fix the over-all shadings, though. And the outline for the cloth and helmet.
The arms are fine. The left leg is ok. The right leg is not really noticeable.

[ArkDelgato]

Lightened the leg armor, made the close skirt more revealing, re-shaded skirt, re-shaded armor, made the harsh purple outline into a more smooth blue one.

[Asmo X]

See, this is how you get better at spriting. Huge improvement Ark. I would just suggest making the arm closest to us a bit shorter. Also, if you're having trouble with that cloth bit that hangs down in front of her legs, remember that many of the shrine knights have the same thing.  You could just c/p and then tweak it to be a bit shorter or something. Still, it's very good.

[Xifanie]

No Asmo, she's just in a position to easily give/receive hugs.

It's probably because of her left arm, but she seems to be falling backwards to me. yes the arm should be shorter but also closer to her body. Right now it looks either distanced or completely behind her.

[ArkDelgato]

Moved the close arm inward, took rofels skirt, shortened it by a few pixels re-colored and slapped it on, knocked down the color count to 15 colors and black, (two different whites and three different out-line browns? One of each now.)

[Kagebunji]

You are doing great! I would help you, but I'm very busy with my sprite now.

[ArkDelgato]

Critique?

[GeneralStrife]

Looks great from the side...

[Sen]

you're missing the yellow line

[mav]

Pick another shade for the gold: it looks too close to the skin right now. But the sprite looks pretty decent overall.