Rad: Sprite changes in Mercenaries?

[jimmyjw88]

This is looking great. ^^

[Sephirot24]

Looks really good
Don't know if that's what Sir LD is aiming for though.

[Fein]

The ponytail doesn't look so great right now. Well, I mean it does look good, just not combined with the  the thin bangs. Almost looks as if Rad traveled to the 80's.

[LastingDawn]

Oh, very nice! Especially for later on in the game!

[mav]

Still working on hair. Next step will be fixing the collar, cravat, etc.

[SilvasRuin]

Something looks off about that line you've got on the collar.  It doesn't blend well and I can't tell what it is.

[mav]

I didn't make the collar, but I believe it's some kind of fold. In any case, I want to get his face and hair down before I start working on the clothing.

[SilvasRuin]

In that case, I have no complaints about the face and hair.  Looks nice.

[mav]

Alright round 2: Mav gets bored and decides to fuck around. Result:

[SilvasRuin]

Very nice.  The buttons are hard to see on the smaller view and might be pointless to have in there, but I don't think they are detrimental.  I like it.

[dwib]

The clothing looks great but I don't like the eyes at all... he is missing a bang for his hair also (the one that goes upwards)

[Fein]

he is missing a bang for his hair also (the one that goes upwards)

I think he got rid of it on purpose.

[Sephirot24]

Nice clothes. They don't seem shaded properly though.. but as I don't know much about spriting I can't point it out specifically =/

[mav]

I did get rid of the upward bang on purpose, but I figured taking out the other two would be taking away what are arguably his most prominent features. I'll work on the eyes and clothes though--assuming you guys can clarify on what you think needs to be fixed.

By the way, this portrait is probably outside the color limit...

[LastingDawn]

I see Nothing wrong with his eyes, if this is final chapter, the look in his eyes is Perfect!

[mav]

Still cleaning up the clothing; fixed up the collar, made it look closer to the concept it's based off. Eyes are still the same--I could remove those wrinkly things...I guess.

[LastingDawn]

They give him character and show the stress he's under, I like them personally.

[Fein]

I agree, I like the eyes a lot, and the clothes look much better. I like this quite a bit actually.

[Cheetah]

That is a cool portrait. Maybe a bit too harsh in nature, but LD would know best haha.

[MiKeMiTchi]

For me, Rad is the innocent one on the team. He should not be angry..
He should be neutral.

His outward happiness belies an inner sadness, about his past and his parents....

Rad is meant to be... well he's supposed to be a complicated character,

Meaning he should look mysterious...


Also, I didn't like the new hair..
The clothes were great on the other hand.

I don't know..