Title: Marle from Chrono Trigger!
Post by: Saigas on October 03, 2009, 03:32:28 pm
Post by: Saigas on October 03, 2009, 03:32:28 pm
Just started up on my next project. I'll be doing Marle from Chrono Trigger!
BTW, these are separate images, so the spacing is off from what it would be on the spritesheet. I'm doing each image one at a time, so I upload it one at a time.
(http://i511.photobucket.com/albums/s356/Voyde/MarleLeftSizex3-1-1.jpg)(http://i511.photobucket.com/albums/s356/Voyde/MarleFront-LeftSizex3.jpg)(http://i511.photobucket.com/albums/s356/Voyde/MarleFrontSizex3.jpg)(http://i511.photobucket.com/albums/s356/Voyde/MarleBack-LeftSizex3.jpg) (http://i511.photobucket.com/albums/s356/Voyde/MarleLeft-1-1.jpg)(http://i511.photobucket.com/albums/s356/Voyde/MarleFront-Left.jpg)(http://i511.photobucket.com/albums/s356/Voyde/MarleFront.jpg)(http://i511.photobucket.com/albums/s356/Voyde/MarleBack-Left.jpg)
As I'm sure you can tell, the body is a slightly modified and recolored Rafa. The head, however, I will admit to shamelessly taking from Lydyn and Zozma's Ponytail Agrias. It is the best head that I can see for Marle, and since I'm still an amateur spriter, I rely mainly on copy/pasting.
Anyway tell me what you think of it. It only has fourteen colors in it, so if there are any particular details I could fix, there is room to do so. ^_^
BTW, these are separate images, so the spacing is off from what it would be on the spritesheet. I'm doing each image one at a time, so I upload it one at a time.
(http://i511.photobucket.com/albums/s356/Voyde/MarleLeftSizex3-1-1.jpg)(http://i511.photobucket.com/albums/s356/Voyde/MarleFront-LeftSizex3.jpg)(http://i511.photobucket.com/albums/s356/Voyde/MarleFrontSizex3.jpg)(http://i511.photobucket.com/albums/s356/Voyde/MarleBack-LeftSizex3.jpg) (http://i511.photobucket.com/albums/s356/Voyde/MarleLeft-1-1.jpg)(http://i511.photobucket.com/albums/s356/Voyde/MarleFront-Left.jpg)(http://i511.photobucket.com/albums/s356/Voyde/MarleFront.jpg)(http://i511.photobucket.com/albums/s356/Voyde/MarleBack-Left.jpg)
As I'm sure you can tell, the body is a slightly modified and recolored Rafa. The head, however, I will admit to shamelessly taking from Lydyn and Zozma's Ponytail Agrias. It is the best head that I can see for Marle, and since I'm still an amateur spriter, I rely mainly on copy/pasting.
Anyway tell me what you think of it. It only has fourteen colors in it, so if there are any particular details I could fix, there is room to do so. ^_^
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Post by: Kagebunji on October 03, 2009, 03:49:50 pm
Post by: Kagebunji on October 03, 2009, 03:49:50 pm
Use some darker shades around neck, it will help.
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Post by: Saigas on October 03, 2009, 03:58:53 pm
Post by: Saigas on October 03, 2009, 03:58:53 pm
Do you mean darker shades of the skin tone, or darker shades of the clothing?
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Post by: Luiakyn on October 03, 2009, 04:17:17 pm
Post by: Luiakyn on October 03, 2009, 04:17:17 pm
I'd say a touch of both, so that there is a way to distinguish the shirt from the neck 
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Post by: Saigas on October 03, 2009, 04:31:21 pm
Post by: Saigas on October 03, 2009, 04:31:21 pm
I'll see what I can do to fix that. I think I'll finish up the main frames, and then work on the neck. ^^
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Post by: Kagebunji on October 03, 2009, 04:40:16 pm
Post by: Kagebunji on October 03, 2009, 04:40:16 pm
I was talking about whole neck (clothes and skin)
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Post by: scatttman on October 03, 2009, 05:31:04 pm
Post by: scatttman on October 03, 2009, 05:31:04 pm
the arm on the side view looks to big
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Post by: Kagebunji on October 03, 2009, 05:42:54 pm
Post by: Kagebunji on October 03, 2009, 05:42:54 pm
Definitly it's too big, you edited it, or just copy/pasted it?
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Post by: Saigas on October 03, 2009, 05:52:05 pm
Post by: Saigas on October 03, 2009, 05:52:05 pm
It was edited, but it's sorta hard to thin out, cuz Rafa has those god damn wrist bands. >_<
I'm gonna fix that to be sure.
I'm gonna fix that to be sure.
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Post by: Fein on October 03, 2009, 05:54:59 pm
Post by: Fein on October 03, 2009, 05:54:59 pm
Yeah, just fix the arms up a bit and then you're golden.
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Post by: Saigas on October 03, 2009, 06:40:03 pm
Post by: Saigas on October 03, 2009, 06:40:03 pm
Fixed up the arm in the left side view a bit. It may be me, but it seems a little funky now, but definitely thinner and easier to look at than the last one IMO.
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Post by: Kagebunji on October 03, 2009, 06:41:19 pm
Post by: Kagebunji on October 03, 2009, 06:41:19 pm
Now the upper part of arm is a bit outlined, try some lighter shade.
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Post by: Saigas on October 03, 2009, 06:57:51 pm
Post by: Saigas on October 03, 2009, 06:57:51 pm
Used a lighter shade to remove as much as I could see from the outline effect on the Left view's arm. Any better? ^^
Photobucket isn't liking that I'm reuploading the same picture multiple times... ^^;
Photobucket isn't liking that I'm reuploading the same picture multiple times... ^^;
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Post by: kafei on October 03, 2009, 07:39:48 pm
Post by: kafei on October 03, 2009, 07:39:48 pm
Quote from: "Saigas"Photobucket isn't liking that I'm reuploading the same picture multiple times... ^^;It'll update if you refresh the page, otherwise it'll use the older, cached image even if you deleted it.
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Post by: MiKeMiTchi on October 03, 2009, 07:43:22 pm
Post by: MiKeMiTchi on October 03, 2009, 07:43:22 pm
Adjust the hair first.
Okay, once you finish the rough spritesheet, I'll help you finish her.
Okay, once you finish the rough spritesheet, I'll help you finish her.
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Post by: Saigas on October 03, 2009, 07:51:47 pm
Post by: Saigas on October 03, 2009, 07:51:47 pm
Awesome thanks. ^^
In what way does the hair need to be adjusted? Color? Shape?
Color I know will be a given, since she's closer to blonde than this.
In what way does the hair need to be adjusted? Color? Shape?
Color I know will be a given, since she's closer to blonde than this.
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Post by: MiKeMiTchi on October 03, 2009, 07:59:21 pm
Post by: MiKeMiTchi on October 03, 2009, 07:59:21 pm
Not really necessary, though.
The hair bangsss.. (shape)
The hair bangsss.. (shape)
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Post by: Saigas on October 03, 2009, 08:19:49 pm
Post by: Saigas on October 03, 2009, 08:19:49 pm
Ah the shape of the bangs. They aren't quite what Marle has in her portrait, true. But, In her CT spritesheet, her sprite's bangs aren't too diffeerent from this.
...And it's gonna be hard to change that factor. ^^ Lol. I'll try though.
...And it's gonna be hard to change that factor. ^^ Lol. I'll try though.
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Post by: jimmyjw88 on October 03, 2009, 09:07:40 pm
Post by: jimmyjw88 on October 03, 2009, 09:07:40 pm
Looking good ^^
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Post by: mav on October 04, 2009, 11:25:59 am
Post by: mav on October 04, 2009, 11:25:59 am
Not bad, but that dark gray outline is extremely bothersome. And what are those black pixels under her hair on the diagonal rear-facing sprite? The belt needs work on every sprite and the color choice for the clothes seems a bit too green...
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Post by: jimmyjw88 on October 04, 2009, 12:51:51 pm
Post by: jimmyjw88 on October 04, 2009, 12:51:51 pm
What they said.
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Post by: Saigas on October 04, 2009, 01:59:50 pm
Post by: Saigas on October 04, 2009, 01:59:50 pm
The dark gray outline I wasn't sure how to change, the black pixels under her hair actually aren't supposed to be there. 
Minor oopsie from me during the copy/pasting process that I apparently forgot to rectify. The belt uses two colors like Rafa's sash, though I guess that may not be enough. The color choice from the clothes was made to match Marle's color scheme for her sprite and not her artwork, where in her artwork and animated cutscenes her clothes are white, her sprite actually has clothing in a shade of green.
Minor oopsie from me during the copy/pasting process that I apparently forgot to rectify. The belt uses two colors like Rafa's sash, though I guess that may not be enough. The color choice from the clothes was made to match Marle's color scheme for her sprite and not her artwork, where in her artwork and animated cutscenes her clothes are white, her sprite actually has clothing in a shade of green.