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  • [May 19, 2012, 04:58:17 PM]
Koruten's Sprites
« on: May 19, 2012, 04:58:17 PM »
Hey guys. I've really gotten into spriting, so I need some criticism. So far, I've only made part of me.

I'm making it off of the Zodiac sprite. Coments please.

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  • [May 19, 2012, 05:23:57 PM]
Re: Koruten's Sprites
« Reply #1 on: May 19, 2012, 05:23:57 PM »
as i have said on irc...
making the background black would be better for the eyes..
the back frames arent completely recolored yet :D
and the damaged frame has the hair on the right instead of the left..
and on the portrait... remove the outlines of the t-shirt collar.. make it into a darker color from the collar and shade

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  • [May 20, 2012, 08:31:40 PM]
Re: Koruten's Sprites
« Reply #2 on: May 20, 2012, 08:31:40 PM »
It looks like you're recoloring all the gray clothing (shirt + jacket, shoes) one by one. Why not download and use Zodiac's Palette Editor? You could then get those grays changed in one clean sweep to dark teal in about 10 seconds. Good luck!

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  • [May 21, 2012, 02:56:46 AM]
Re: Koruten's Sprites
« Reply #3 on: May 21, 2012, 02:56:46 AM »
Oh really? Thanks!

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  • [June 03, 2012, 05:16:39 PM]
Fixed Marche
« Reply #4 on: June 03, 2012, 05:16:39 PM »
The Marche sprite off of the main site's sprite database is messed up and some places, and I decided to fix those mistakes. Here you guys go.

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  • [June 03, 2012, 05:18:09 PM]
Re: Koruten's Sprites
« Reply #5 on: June 03, 2012, 05:18:09 PM »
Finished.

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  • [June 03, 2012, 07:20:39 PM]
Re: Koruten's Sprites
« Reply #6 on: June 03, 2012, 07:20:39 PM »
This needs to be fixed, heavilly. And since critting is too hard given the amount of stuff to do, here are fixes I did.

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  • [June 03, 2012, 08:04:59 PM]
Re: Koruten's Sprites
« Reply #7 on: June 03, 2012, 08:04:59 PM »
Um. That's looking great Kagebunji, I love the hair but, he isn't suppost to be wearing a jacket, he's wearing a shirt.

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  • [June 03, 2012, 08:20:05 PM]
Re: Koruten's Sprites
« Reply #8 on: June 03, 2012, 08:20:05 PM »
I'm no spriter, but the two blues on the original seem to clash with each other. That'd be a start, I think.

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  • [June 03, 2012, 08:32:38 PM]
Re: Koruten's Sprites
« Reply #9 on: June 03, 2012, 08:32:38 PM »
Bare chest just makes him much more badass. Well, you can always change it back to a shirt, but it will most likely be flat. Also, you need to work more on the portrait, cause shirt is totally flat, and those dark outlines just add in to the effect. Well, I wanted to use this fix for something of my own, but yoy can feel free to use it.

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  • [June 03, 2012, 08:37:10 PM]
Re: Koruten's Sprites
« Reply #10 on: June 03, 2012, 08:37:10 PM »
Thanks Kagebunki. I'll be sure to use it.

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  • [June 05, 2012, 07:15:22 PM]
Re: Koruten's Sprites
« Reply #11 on: June 05, 2012, 07:15:22 PM »
Using Kagebunji's Sprite, I finished the sheet. Unfortunatly, the image apears like crap in the pal editor and won't work in SHISHI's Sprite Editor.

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  • [June 05, 2012, 07:42:26 PM]
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« Reply #12 on: June 05, 2012, 07:42:26 PM »
There's the BMP also.
I fixed it by opening in Graphics Gale, then going under ALLFRAMES, COLORDEPTH, I changed it to 4pp (16 color) then back 8pp (256 color) and saving it. To add a portrait and it's separate palette see:http://ffhacktics.com/tutorials.php?id=10

  
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  • [June 05, 2012, 07:57:36 PM]
Re: Koruten's Sprites
« Reply #13 on: June 05, 2012, 07:57:36 PM »
Again, Thanks Lijj.

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  • [June 05, 2012, 08:13:01 PM]
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« Reply #14 on: June 05, 2012, 08:13:01 PM »
Finished my first sprite thanks to Kagebunji and Lijj.


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  • [June 06, 2012, 04:39:59 AM]
Re: Koruten's Sprites
« Reply #15 on: June 06, 2012, 04:39:59 AM »
looks like someone from dragon ball haha
anyway i think using kage's suggested palettes would be better?

Please do share your ideas and suggestion for my project:
FINAL FANTASY TACTICS : LEGEND OF MANA

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[FFT: Journey of The Five]


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