Cool Storm sprite! There are a couple things that look off though.. the angle of the collar mostly. and the black tiara.. which is really hard to get right at this size. I don't even know if I got it right but I went ahead and tried editing that a bit too. Added 1 more color so now it's 16 total and the skin is better separated from the outfit.
Not bad! Looks like some of the colors could use a bit more value separation.. like the reds on Terra. They seem too close to the same value, so the depth is a little lost there. Lighten the lighter colors. Also their eyes both look weird; Fran's because the white of the eyes is too dark and Terra's because of the color used for the iris/pupils is too light.
Colours: Red, Blue, Ermine With claim to the crown, since the king has fallen, Dravrus has invaded and occupied the lands of Arrisia; The lands formerly held by house Shrouw. Part of the New Dagoran Empire.