hello guys :D
Best Regards
(http://www.anime4arab.com/vb/members/40459-albums150-picture1261.png)
The hair's pretty cool. Is that the whole sprite though? I'm afraid to download.
yea sure it is whole i test it ^^
Thanks for opine (:
Well good I like. It's simple; a great 1st sprite. Great as a Ramza replacement. Much better than my 1st attempt.http://216.59.2.117/~zodiac/forum/viewtopic.php?f=16&t=405&start=180&sid=820c5a80922e6e5f02582b1ce69ec5cf
The armor and boot colors are too bright/saturated--borrow from existing palettes. Borrowing from existing armor palettes specifically would help. The portrait is a little trashed...the scar needs better shading and the hair shape doesn't look right.
Thanks for note (:
I most fix it
Also, do some new armor or legs, it too similiar to Ramza, make it more unique, copy/paste some armor or something.
Thanks bro I try and I hope made it
Now what about this ?
With all that red and blue he kind of looks like an Emo Steve Rogers aka Captain America. Oh and Lijj is right the hair does look pretty cool
Note: this is not an insult. Just an observation.
what should I do to be good spirte ?
Like I said, change the armor or legs, before doing this, you don't even dare submit it!
Btw, from what country are you?
np if you want I submit it
what do you mean change armor or legs ?
you mean change armor and create new armor from my brain ?
Yes, he means he thinks you should do something other than a simple recolor and hair edit. He suggested taking the legs or armor from something else and using them instead.
Hmmmm is that so , thanks bro for clearly note
Hello guys
My next spirte
Young Ramza noble
I need while to learn good edite
Have you tested it out in game at all?
You are far from finishing it. CHANGE ARMOR/LEGS/ARMS/EVERYTHING!!!!!!!! It is in serious need of editing. Too similiar to Wiegraf/Beowulf.
ok hold on i'm beginner edite ):
Always test out your sprites in game before trying to post them so other people can play 'em.
Ok Ok, but you need to do this, you be a better spriter if you edite this spirte
Quote from: "DeadManWalking"Always test out your sprites in game before trying to post them so other people can play 'em.
I test it in game no problem .
but i need edite to change something like what said Kagebunji
what about this ?
Better, but the blues are too dark and saturated. Always take colors from other sprites, never do your own. And try to do something with hair, to make it look less like Ramza.
I ask again: FROM WHAT COUNTRY ARE YOU AND WHAT IS YOUR FIRST LANGUAGE?!
ok thanks
Quote from: "Kagebunji"I ask again: FROM WHAT COUNTRY ARE YOU AND WHAT IS YOUR FIRST LANGUAGE?!
Saudi Arabia
And his first language is obviously Arabic
like what said Zodiac :?:
I make sprite Shadow FF6
This looks good, but you must make it brighter a bit. Also post bigger sprites along with those small you posted.
Thanks for to support me I do my best to be good sprite
Wow, that Shadow is really good. What parts of other sprites did you use? Or is all of that custom? I think I recognize part of the arms from somewhere, but I don't recall where...
I do this arms from my brain
ok Kagebunji , what about this brightens ?
It is great. it is bright enough I think. Good job!
Just remeber to post bigger versions of sprite too.
I can see clearly that you have some slight problems in english language, so if you don't understand some word in english, ask us. We won't kill you for this you know
Thank for your rating and i do my best sprites
About english i'm average but if I have any problem I will ask
Best regards
And remeber to post in PNG's format, Zodiac once said to never post BMP's.
And that is what I mean by sayin "bigger version"
Are the color values multiples of 8? (Or was that 4?) If they aren't, then the colors will get messed up when put in-game. I don't think anyone warned you about that yet. That can mess up an otherwise good sprite.
Take Kagebunji advice Grand. This is a good sprite and the color tones are definitely improved. I wonder if the eyes might get one more pixel, but I think it is also just part of the character tat you can hardly see them.
Mar Habbah friend from Mecca. That shadow looks good, much better than the others yet!
Thanks Lijj ^^
But what did you mean by from mecca ?
I fixed graphics
Is Mecca not in Saudi Arabia?
Any way good range of color now.
Keep up the good work!
Still lookin good to me. Just lookin forward
Quote from: "Cheetah"Take Kagebunji advice Grand. This is a good sprite and the color tones are definitely improved. I wonder if the eyes might get one more pixel, but I think it is also just part of the character tat you can hardly see them.
Yea sure it is in saudi arabia but you can speak arabic , you said (Mar habbah )
Thanks Kagebunji I enthusiastic to finish it
i fixed eyes like what said Cheetah
This is looking really good. Great job. Looking forward. And good job with the glowing eyes. Definitely gives the creep.
Ah I see what you did with the eyes. Try putting the dark shade of red where the color of the character's eyes would normally be, and the dark red where the white of their eye would be. Try that and post it, I might even recommend making the dark red a bit brigher, but first I want to see the different placement.
now what about this ?
Too much! the less obvious the better.
now what about face ?
For Sprite: The 2 brown pixels below red eyes, make black.
For Face: Good Potential. But, No outlines; Blend the outlines.
Change back the eyes, especially the colour. The first one gives more creepiness factor than your latest attempts.
Quote from: "jimmyjw88"Change back the eyes, especially the colour. The first one gives more creepiness factor than your latest attempts.
Note to everyone dear .
I wish all members to give me only one view, I can not take all of your comments, someone says to me than this and someone else says otherwise, by me, I respect all your views and comments.
I hope you cooperate with me in uniform and thank you
Best regards
Leave the eyes as they are now, further experimenting might end bad. We will work on portrait later, don't rush it that much, haha
Ah, very nice! I think you could use a little more of the darkest gold shade on his head. Right now you have the two lighter shades and it lacks depth.
soon i finish it
Hm good job. I though I saw some errors on back walking frames, but I forgot that arms will be there and coveer it fully, heh. Good job, lookin forward to this. Shadow was one of my best characters for long
.
Someone make a portrait for this sprite, stat.
The only concern I have with this awesome sprite is the little tie on the back of his head. It needs to swing slightly in the walking animation.
Make it swing just 1 pixel to the left for first two then 1 pixel to the right for last two. Leave middle frame the same. Should be an easy edit.
For the swinging you can use the belt on the front walking animation as a reference.
Greeting
Don't hasty Kagebunji i'm work in arms , soon i finish it and i rest my eyes :D
now what i most fix it ?
Hello guys
Now i'm work in arms to finish it
Good! I'm Glad You Pop'd back in! I want to see this one completed. Arms are looking great. The tie on back of head (walk frames) still needs to swing. As Cheetah said copy the belt's movement. Good job.
Sweet Shadow, looking forward to it.
shadow's head looks off center by about 1 pixel in the forward stop frame, probably needs to be moved to the right 1 pixel or be 1pixel wider to fix it...
What happened to you? Get this far on Shadow then vanish?
this is exactly the way sprite projects end up 90% of the time
I blame the lower arm sections.
Those slow tedious fuckers.
Sad but true, he isn't even showing on FFH anymore.
this shadow sprite looks really good maybe if he doesnt appear someone could finish the sprite
This wouldn't have happened if we had a portrait!
I kid, but seriously, this is yet another good sprite that's going uncompleted. Hopefully he'll return and complete this thing.
very well... i shall add this to the list of abandoned projects...
Greeting
I'm return .
Sorry about long time not come here because my pc is out of order , now i have new pc .
about Shadow I return to complete it .
Best regards
Welcome back, man. I really hope this sprite gets completed. Let us know what you need, and hopefully we can get it to ya. Good luck.
I completed 70% , coming soon I complete it 100%
Well alright! Glad you made it back MasterGrand.
Looking forward.
i relly like this sprite
tryed to do a portrait but looks like shit (http://img10.imageshack.us/img10/2396/44897999.png)
It's a starting point. Who's gonna pick it up from here?
I wonder if our Japanese friends have ever done a Shadow portrait...
Hmm...What game is it from? Any reference? Or is it just an idea of sprite?
Quote from: "jimmyjw88"Hmm...What game is it from? Any reference? Or is it just an idea of sprite?
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Its FF61!!!!!!!111!!111oneONE
Lol. I didn't play through or know about all the FFs. So, my apologies. xD
FF6...Hmm...Let's take a look at it.
It's funny when you first see him one of your party members is like....omfga thats shadow..he'd slit his mommas throat for a nickel!
Hmm...I'll see if I can give it a crack.
I completed FF6 Shadow 100% but before put it i will fix it then i put it
Nice! Need some portrait aid?
Sure I need aid , I hope jimmyjw aid me
Oh I see.. i wasn't paying attention.
Don't shy if you can aid me np I be glad to aid me .
Thanks Lijj ^_^
I'll see what I can do.
Thanks alot Jimmyjw .
Well this is a win, MasterGrand you should submit it to the finished customs sprites page
Went through the frames 1 by 1 in Shi Shi's and
I edited them haids... all of them. (+ some other small errors I found)
Thanks Lijj for fixed this small problem but i find one boot not color correct and I corrected , anyway
we need someone make portrait .[attachment=0:2gvpuitx]Shadow FF6.bmp[/attachment:2gvpuitx]
Glad you fixed it more. I didn't notice the feet.
Yes. I'm ready for this sprite!
Quote from: "MasterGrand"we need someone make portrait .
C'mon JimmyJW
Lijj, you should try too. Who knows, probably I wouldn't need to do it.
"I sleet your mother's throat for a neekel..
Then I summon Interceptor to finish her."
(http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/7458/shdwprtex.png) (http://img441.imageshack.us/i/shdwprtex.png/)
Feel free to edit.
Thanks for aid & Great job Lijj .
What about this protrait ?
Good job on sprite, Grand! It is a nice surprise to return and see Shadow completed. Lijj's portrait is better, just need a tweak or two.
Thanks Kage for praise , but not told me about your opinion for my protrait ?
Hey MasterGrand, Why don't you use the Lijj's portrait? I think it looks good for FFT and your portrait is fine too but it's the same as FF6.
ok now what about this portrait , it is not same FF6 .
Nah, that is not it, Grand. Just use Lijj's one.
ok no problem Kage as you wish
Hmm...Looks good. I might or might not take a crack as I'm busy with life. Though, I doubt it'll be good.
Oh man liji i creamed my pants when i saw that portrait
Don't stop here guys. This port can be improved.
It looks too plain and round.. Needs more ninja stuff going on, like some of those thin spike fin things or something. He looks too thin and unhealthy, his pose looks like if he was frustrated because of not wanting to pose for the cam, gives the feeling of being a skinny weak zombie instead of an assasin, ect.
He really needs to look menacing and mysterious like the FF6 port, and it can be done without copying the pose.
Remember the contrast, too.
Hello guys
Sprite is ready to download .
Good luck
Hello guys
I think next sprite Hanzo Hattori - Samurai Shadown .
The red is too saturated. Do not outline objects. Is that mesh on his arms? That will never look good. Too many straight, horizontal lines. The arms are not symmetrical. The trim on the shoulder pauldrons is barely distinguishable. Too heavy on the darker shades. Look at other sprites to get a better idea. "Noisy" shading, especially on the scarf. The light source is inconsistent. Look at the shoes and thighs to see what i mean. You need to rely more on other sprites until you get better.
cool shadow sprite mastergrand congratulations
for hanzo hatori like asmo sayd red are too saturated try using colors of original fft game sprites and his face looks like a robot like robocop try to make it more isometrical it will look fine good luck with the sprite
Just use a the color of a red thief for the scarf. I think that color would fit for what you are trying to do. And yes, there is a black outline on his arms, which needs fixed. But it does look pretty cool.
okay, for the port. i think he needs slightly bigger shoulders and also perhaps a more obvious indication that he has ears underneath that. also didn't shadow have like something tied in the back? maybe that can be visible as well to make the plain roundness less so
Okay this is what I got.
(http://img29.imageshack.us/img29/7167/shdwprtexa.png) (http://img29.imageshack.us/i/shdwprtexa.png/)
(http://img32.imageshack.us/img32/4486/shadow2ki.jpg) (http://img32.imageshack.us/i/shadow2ki.jpg/)________________I think this matches the sprite a little better and stay true- enough, to the other design.
I don't know what to do with a fin..
(http://img185.imageshack.us/img185/2659/shdwportex.png) (http://img185.imageshack.us/i/shdwportex.png/)horn?
That portrait makes him look a little too skinny, but it's fine. Is the sprite palette gonna be made to match the portrait better? Whatever, this sprite's pretty much ready to go.
I thought most of the portraits showed skinny necks at least in tactics.
But here is a slight edit:
(I should have listened to Zozma the first time
)
(http://img29.imageshack.us/img29/7452/shdwportexa.png) (http://img29.imageshack.us/i/shdwportexa.png/)
Tactics characters are pencil-necks I tell you.. I crush them
Wow this is a great improvement. There may be a few more things to tweak, but I can't say what they are. You are really improving Lijj, keep it up.
Maybe the horn should be just a pixel thicker in some areas?
Quote from: "Lijj"Tactics characters are pencil-necks I tell you.. I crush them
Imagine Darth Vader in FFT.. Insta-kill anything with his Force choke attack.
This actually reminds me of my incomplete Stormtrooper sprite. Hmm..
Also mind what ffta707 said.
Hello guys
Islud Noble
Best regards
Haha, thats easy. What purples are those? From Reis the dragon? Its not bad.
the only problem is the the angle of the head against that collar... too bad you cant get someone to draw izlude's head upright or make the collar take the same angle as his initial neck and shoulders did or this would look just fine
you mean portrait or sprite ?
Zozma means the portrait, Isluid's head isnt on the same angle as the scarf/collar.
Nice and simple sprite, have you tested this ingame?
what about now ?
Looks about the same. I know this is probably a tough portrait, but try to make his head still a little straighter. I think you could rotate this in Adobe InDesign without screwing up the pixels, but I'm not sure...
the saturated purple is fugly
Quote from: "GeneralStrife"the saturated purple is fugly
Agreed. Try another purple.
Edit: Or no purple at all
Also, look at our posts number GS, they are one off haha.
What about this now ?
Agreed, the purple isn't really working with green. The complimentary color of green is red, the complimentary color of purple is orange, your choice, those should improve it.
Quote from: "ffta707"Quote from: "GeneralStrife"the saturated purple is fugly
Agreed. Try another purple.
Edit: Or no purple at all
Also, look at our posts number GS, they are one off haha.
not anymore
and this ?
Haha, now its Beowulf with Izludes head! XD
Now what do you think for this ?
Actually this looks okay, but pink is a girls color...
It's definitly not girl's color, girls just use it way more often, and probably 90% of humankind accepted it that it is girl's color. Pink color looks interesting, it's very unlikely to be seen in FFT.
It looks like he's got a sunburn. If you wanna use purple, then use better purples. Since you're in the mood to change this guy a bit, replace the greens while you're at it. Consider changing the cape color a bit too.
Yeah, like Mav said, change the colors around to at least make it look custom. Try colors that are uncommon. Pink is uncommon, but girly, so don't listen to Kage, you want a warrior, not a girly man!
(just kiddin Kage!)
you want change color pink is that all ?
Give me that! *Snatches Izlude project from MasterGrand*
Hmm...
*scrible scrible scrible*
Done! Balk blacks ftw! (I know, just my opinion, I think it looks good this way)
[attachment=0:1ym7dme1]noble islude.bmp[/attachment:1ym7dme1]
OK good color Jon but why not told me before about this color you want .
Lijj, next time you check this topic. The portrait you did for Shadow only seems to be 31x48.
I don't know MasterGrand, I just sorta made it. What I wrote was just joking. I hope you like it
Btw, your avatar is kinda creepy Mari.
Hmmm i think you serious, howevere pink not bad i think
May I suggest renaming this to, "Master Grands Sprites"? Since, this is no longer your first edit.
That is right , this not my first edit .
He is trying to say..
If you go to your first post and press "Edit"
[attachment=0:iuu5hipw]ex.png[/attachment:iuu5hipw]
You can change the title to something.
Maybe MasterGrand's Sprites
Or any name you choose.
Quote from: "Mari"He is trying to say..
If you go to your first post and press "Edit"
[attachment=0:3pipue6b]ex.png[/attachment:3pipue6b]
You can change the title to something.
Maybe MasterGrand's Sprites
Or any name you choose.
Thanks for saving me the trouble Mari.
Oh is that so , thanks Mari
Now Noble Islude sprite is ready for download .
Color Gloves and thigh by Jon and Sprite by MasterGrand .
Quote from: "MasterGrand"Now Noble Islude sprite is ready for download .
Color Gloves and thigh by Jon and Sprite by MasterGrand .
Good job MasterGrand! And a good sprite at that.
I think I don't have to say about this charade....
um did you ever fix the portrait since his head is at an angle that, with that collar, looks like its about to fall off?
r0fl
Quote from: "Zozma"um did you ever fix the portrait since his head is at an angle that, with that collar, looks like its about to fall off?
I doubt it. I'll look real quick.
EDIT: Nope, no fix. It is at the same stage as it was on the Saturated purple picture. I would fix that MG.
Hello guys
This is Kletian noble
(http://img815.imageshack.us/img815/9130/noblekletian.png)
Best regards
This was fun in the beginning, but now it is not. How is pasting every character's head onto Wiegraf's body make anyone a noble? More creativity, more.
then what should I do for this sprite ?
I am not the one to think on that. Try changing legs, arms, chest, anything. We will make sre to crit it. Different palette is a must too.
Honestly, try to do something hard. I think it's ok if you first attemmpt of sprite is a headswap but those sprites don't have much future in patches. Also Imo you should avoid headswaps and go further than that and try to replace with more parts of other sprites, besides the noble thing is not very interesting why not try some futuristic or modern concepts to create sprites.
Ok no problem , what about this sprite ?
(http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/9282/testyd.png)
Uhh...it's just ramza with a temple knight cape...looks bad bro.
Not to mention you copied some of wiegraf's hair onto ramza
(http://www.gogaminggiant.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/07/facepalm.jpg)
Hello guys
give me your opine for this sprite ?
(http://img810.imageshack.us/img810/6043/gilvert.png)
Surely better than Ramza lolsprite. It would make a nice, new wariation of Delita(he looks kinda like Mercenary, wich is good). I wouldn't mind seeing this done.
Sure i will try to done it ;)
Thanks for give me your opine :D
I will try to be best sprite .
(http://img861.imageshack.us/img861/8003/delita2.png)
looks good, from what I can tell of this small image though. not sure how the headband is looking with his hair
I try to do my best
Thanks for give me your opine
MasterGrand I notice your avatar, that the headband is half way colored brown where is should be red. Complete the headband red and it should look more real!
Thanks for note , i will fix :D
I change color headband to blue
(http://img33.imageshack.us/img33/2238/delita3.png)
This is looking half decent Grand. They are still very small edits in the grand scheme of things, but not bad. Note that in the sprite the headband goes under the hair and in the portrait it goes over. Also the headband needs some shading under it on the face so that it looks like it belongs there.
Thanks Cheetah for note i fix this problem .
eh... :/
I don't think he looks as good in light colors because of his dark hair... also why the headband? Is there a purpose? Is it like adding a cape to make them noble except headband = monk now - .-? If anything head wise give him a circlet.
Something like this would be more suiting.
That is way too brown for my liking, honestly.
I like MasterGrand's version more. Looks like a Mercenary on MG's one.
I don't see a point to having a headband, but to each his own, I suppose. I like the mercenary look, it just doesn't look as nice with his hair and skin color. Very cool though.
Do not hate on the headband obviously MasterGrand likes it.
The headband looks nice and more unique.
Quote from: dinosaur on April 22, 2011, 06:01:44 pm
The headband looks nice and more unique.
Yes, I agree. Without it, it would basicly be a color swap after all.
I'm work to finish sprite mercenary Dilta's
I need someone to make portrait for mercenary Dilta's
Won't your avatar work? Lol. I know it is not perfect, but it would surely fit.
can you help me Kagebunji for fix headband my avatar & colors ? :(
No answer :(
Well I can't. I am pretty busy with my own sprites, and I don't have much time IRL either. So I am not making any promises now or taking requests, sorry. This surely can't be that hard though, try it yourself. Last option would be to make the headband silver, just like the armor, that way you sae some colors and fit into 16 colors limit.
I think the color of the shirt will have to match the headband. Delita's hair has far too many colors, I remember from my re-palette.
ok no problem , I try to do something...
Greeting
I need help for portrait , i put sprite and i hope somebody help me .
(http://img811.imageshack.us/img811/2238/delita3.png)
Best regards
I know you've been asking me to help out with this, but I'm kinda swamped for the next week or so. I'll get to it once I have some more time.
What do you even need help with? Its just delita with a headband....facepalm.
Thanks mav i be waiting you .
Quote from: GeneralStrife on August 10, 2011, 01:35:06 am
What do you even need help with? Its just delita with a headband....facepalm.
are you sure ? go and check delita sprite original . and i'm not yet finish sprite .
Sorry, I didn't have much time to devote to this, but here's a 16 color portrait for you.
Thanks Mav....
a better detail in the portrait is that according to his neck is blue sprite,the mav's version is more original
who is can complete sprite ?
why can't you do it?
Because my job take all my time, that is why i can't complete it
I be so happy if someone completed sprite .
I wouldn't dare waste effort completing a headband version of delita >.>;
its hipster delita mando LMAO
needs glasses :D
Needs chinese character tats that mean death, hope, and love. Oh and needs more black with a messy hair style.
hello guys
I need help for head color
This is freakin awesome, I've wanted a Tir McDohl sprite for a Loooong time.
Maybe you could use this as a reference?
(http://ffhacktics.com/smf/index.php?action=dlattach;topic=6600.0;attach=6467;image)
Tir definitely has a green headband.
Hello guys
Long time not working on sprite :mrgreen:
what is your opinion for this sprite ?
I like it. Elmdor's sprite kind of sucks. This would make for an awesome update.
Can we see a normal side view instead please?
Megman Network - Protoman
Alucart :mrgreen:
Hey MG. I made ya a present. It's over here: http://ffhacktics.com/smf/index.php?topic=405.360#msg179858
Enjoy.
You know celdia, you didn't do THAT bad of a job for a custom headband lol.
Hello guys
I wonder if you like sprite or not, anyway this sprite Ryu I use Ken sprite to make ryu :mrgreen:
(http://img713.imageshack.us/img713/5567/u1ku.png)
This is sprite Ryu I need someone make portrait :|
Fixed Sprite
Thanks advance
No comments ?
Who will make portrait ?
Where are his iconic red headband and sparring pads? His hair is too long as well. Ryu keeps it clean.