Yet another FFT Artwork from me

[Algus]

spoiler: Priest

spoiler: Original Size

Enjoy the view  
any critics and suggestion are accepted

[Dome]

You made it? That's...quite good! Well done :-)

P.s: Give her bigger boobs and I'll give you my full approval xD

[Algus]

You made it? That's...quite good! Well done :-)

P.s: Give her bigger boobs and I'll give you my full approval xD

Yup, and congrats! you've meet the author ;]
and thx for the suggestion and compliment
since it has not been uploaded to the public yet, I think I'll try to follow your suggestion and update it asap ;]

[Xifanie]

She looks too wide open. You should stick the legs closer to each other and give them more of an angle up to... well up there.

[Kaijyuu]

Did good with the cloth parts.

Legs are a bit off as Xif mentioned.


The staff and hand holding it look a tad bit wacky. First off the fingers on the hand have weird lengths (middle finger is longest remember). Secondly you shaded part of the staff at the end, but not all of it. All the curves should have shading to give the staff depth.

[Algus]

Did good with the cloth parts.

Legs are a bit off as Xif mentioned.


The staff and hand holding it look a tad bit wacky. First off the fingers on the hand have weird lengths (middle finger is longest remember). Secondly you shaded part of the staff at the end, but not all of it. All the curves should have shading to give the staff depth.

hm... you right :\
let see what I can do for it, will update it asap.
thx for your critics, suggestion and compliment ;] I appreciate it

[Algus]

*Updated

P.s: Give her bigger boobs and I'll give you my full approval xD

Sorry Dome, It's look weird when I was made it bigger --"

[Dome]

>_>

[Algus]

Don't worry Dome, I'll make a bigger boobs on the next FFT artwork ;]

[Taichii]

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[Algus]

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HOLY SHIT!! :L
*nose bleeding

[Lijj]

Nice drawing Algus. I like the shading with lines like that and the simplicity you kept.

[Algus]

Thx for the compliment Lijj ;]
well actually this is the first time for me to using line shading
for my FFT artwork, I thought it would be ugly -- but it seems everyone
like it ^^