EsperBlades: The solution to Summoners! (First Page Update)

[Effephoenix]

[MiKeMiTchi]

^ looks good!
My only comment, just fix the jaw.

[Archael]

eyes are too pixely

[mav]

He looks very brutish, I like the hair though. It needs some work, so keep at it; there's nothing more fun that working on portraits for Mercenaries.

[Effephoenix]

I made it softer as a whole. How's it now?

[MiKeMiTchi]

Imo, his neck looks fat.
It looks better now, though.

[Archael]

still too pixely the concept is good but there's something very off with those eyes and neck line

[MiKeMiTchi]

I *kinda* edited Effephoenix's portrait work:




changes:
-fixed some shadings to lessen the "pixely part"
-cut down to 16 colors, fixed some coloring
-normalized the eyes, plus made the expression more visible.
-made it more unique by adding scars.

-I am planning to change his eye color!

[Kagebunji]

Something on this portrait looks odd, but I know not what...

[boomkick]

He looks like a guy who would be a tough guy without a care for magic and the like

[Kagebunji]

Yeah I got such feeling too, maybe add something conected to magic? Maybe horn, just like summoners had.

[LastingDawn]

No, no horn... actually... is it possible to give them a very.... Balmafula-like calm look on the portrait? That's what I see these people as. More Warrior-Celtic society, which is how I saw the class from the start.

[mav]

Heh, the scars make him look like a tiger. I'd try my hand on this portrait, but it looks like you have a pretty decent handle on things.

[Kagebunji]

You mean LD that they should be quiet-cool-strong type? Well that wouldn't be bad for that amigo.

[Archael]

TAKE AWAY THOSE SCARS

NOW!!!!

[Zaen]

TAKE AWAY THOSE SCARS

NOW!!!!

This. Pl0x. No scars.

[MiKeMiTchi]

Voldemort wrote:

TAKE AWAY THOSE SCARS

NOW!!!!

This. Pl0x. No scars.

Can I know your reasonings? hehe..
Okay.

[Archael]

my reasoning? they look bad and don't fix the original problems present in the portrait

it just adds more problems

[Effephoenix]

The shades Mike used were better, so I just used those and calmed down the expression.

[MiKeMiTchi]

^ yeah. Thanks for editing it.
That makes it look good..