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Seushiro
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  • [August 19, 2009, 04:12:50 AM]
Seushiro's Sprites... Redoing some sprites
« on: August 19, 2009, 04:12:50 AM »
Here is the summary of my Crap:

Female Zalbag:


Agrias Knights:


Vash the Stampede:


Treize:


Org XIII:


Vahn:


Ramza:


Sephiroth: Smash Concept


Marche Concept


Ryu:


Old Avatar:


Seushiro:


Reno:


Fei Fong Wong:


Izlude:


Iron Man:


Strider:


Cavalier:


Chunli:


Charlie/Bison/Cammy:


Charlie:


Ken:


2 Very first sprites as a beginner on 8/22/2009

« Last Edit: November 27, 2009, 02:00:29 AM by Seushiro »
Clementine
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  • [August 19, 2009, 04:19:17 AM]
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« Reply #1 on: August 19, 2009, 04:19:17 AM »
You need to make the resolution on these a lot bigger. I don't know what you did, but they shouldn't be this tiny. I can hardly see them, and my screen is huge.
Also, post them in PNG.
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  • [August 19, 2009, 04:30:38 AM]
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« Reply #2 on: August 19, 2009, 04:30:38 AM »
Welcome to the site. :)
Those were great edits. Haha.

Just make it bigger as Clementine said.
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  • [August 19, 2009, 04:47:09 AM]
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« Reply #3 on: August 19, 2009, 04:47:09 AM »
i dont know about you guys but it looks normal to me... but anyways i like the genesis sprite, it still needs work on it though and squall needs alot of work done...
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  • [August 19, 2009, 06:06:30 AM]
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« Reply #4 on: August 19, 2009, 06:06:30 AM »
but the portraits, do you plan to make fft style ones?
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Seushiro
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  • [August 19, 2009, 06:17:38 AM]
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« Reply #5 on: August 19, 2009, 06:17:38 AM »
I dnt know how to make portraits. . .

In both of them all i got was. . ..  FAIL
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  • [August 19, 2009, 06:22:19 AM]
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« Reply #6 on: August 19, 2009, 06:22:19 AM »
Good concept of Genesis, work on him a bit and he will look just great, about Squall... I can't see anything :D
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  • [August 19, 2009, 06:30:57 AM]
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« Reply #7 on: August 19, 2009, 06:30:57 AM »
The Genesis one is good. Squall, not so much. He looks flat, and like a cartoon. |:
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  • [August 19, 2009, 01:20:29 PM]
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« Reply #8 on: August 19, 2009, 01:20:29 PM »
^^ exactly. I'd trade out that yellow on his jacket for another shade of gray. Aside from that, they look awesome >: D
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  • [August 19, 2009, 02:20:46 PM]
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« Reply #9 on: August 19, 2009, 02:20:46 PM »
On squall:
- Don't use black as an outline color for hair; ever.
- The Black shading looks reversed?
- The white is way too light.
- Needs darker hair.

On Genesis:
- The "light circle on his hair" needs to be a little darker; And personally I don't think it's necessary, it would probably look better without it.

The reason you guys probably can't see them well is probably just because of the darker colors used.

But yeah good work; especially on the Genesis sprite.
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    • [August 19, 2009, 03:34:08 PM]
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    « Reply #10 on: August 19, 2009, 03:34:08 PM »
    The Genesis sprite isn't bad for a first-timer. You seen to have trouble lining things up diagonally and you make the classic mistake of over saturating some areas.

    The Squall should just be redone from scratch. Never use black as an outline. Its for deep shading. If you are making a new sprite, copy and paste from existing sprites to get something close to what you want and then make very small changes. Also try not to come up with your own palettes right away. Its way harder than it looks. If you want a series of blues for example, copy them from another sprite.
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    • [August 20, 2009, 12:01:24 AM]
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    « Reply #11 on: August 20, 2009, 12:01:24 AM »
    Thanks for the feedback. . . and yup each statement is true. . . looking at it right now doing the fixes from ur advise would really make it good. . . thanks for the tips.
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    • [August 20, 2009, 12:12:45 AM]
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    « Reply #12 on: August 20, 2009, 12:12:45 AM »
    I'm not sure how to say this exactly. So here goes. Squalls hair is too tidy.
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    Oh pitiful shadow lost in the darkness, bringing torment and pain to others. Oh damned soul wallowing in your sin, perhaps...it is time to die
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    • [August 20, 2009, 06:12:37 PM]
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    « Reply #13 on: August 20, 2009, 06:12:37 PM »
    dude, the genesis sprite is great for a first timer... I don't think I could do better my first time around

    good job, andI hope to see these improve, especially that Genesis one.. I like it alot
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    • [August 20, 2009, 06:24:50 PM]
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    « Reply #14 on: August 20, 2009, 06:24:50 PM »
    Genesis sprite is good indeed, just try to make his face when he take damage less "WTF is goin on?!", or you just want him to look like that?
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    • [August 22, 2009, 02:01:18 AM]
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    « Reply #15 on: August 22, 2009, 02:01:18 AM »
    Have to do Genesis from the top too. . . He has the soldier belt, buckled boots, and an open coat with collar. I think I was thinking of Sephiroth's coat during the time. . .

    here is wat I have done with my boredom. . .





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    • [August 22, 2009, 02:06:12 AM]
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    « Reply #16 on: August 22, 2009, 02:06:12 AM »
    o.o Reno?! Awesome!

    Nice going, you gunna finish it? I'll try to make a portrait for it xD
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    • [August 22, 2009, 02:06:40 AM]
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    « Reply #17 on: August 22, 2009, 02:06:40 AM »
    Looks like you could go from there and make a pretty good Reno.

    Edit:  Dang, Zalge beat me to it.
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    • [August 22, 2009, 02:08:28 AM]
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    « Reply #18 on: August 22, 2009, 02:08:28 AM »
    No Reno possible. . . unless somebody has a complete sprite of that butler. . .  wew
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    • [August 22, 2009, 02:22:27 AM]
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    « Reply #19 on: August 22, 2009, 02:22:27 AM »
    the custom cloud sprite has pants similar (elmdor's pants are almost the butler pants as well) just to give an idea for parts
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